Cosmic Impressions

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I  shall forever remain 
a night’s celestial pilgrim
meandering beneath
the skyscape’s  towering dome --
And along  the cobblestone
of  luminous  runways,
jewels of flamed  beamers  seem to flick
beyond earth’s  tableau as  the grandeur
from  anonymous stars  explode,

That I imagine Orion’s  groove
whirling around a trillion cosmic moons—
nameless yet ascertained...
for some percieved reason, each nova
circles on its own orbital zone
pulsing then ebbing through my
enigmatic impression ... until
I am devoured by each shimmer,
each odyssey, each dancelight--
making my quill’s ink curdle again.



Pareidolia Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Craig Cornish  8/22/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 8/29/2020 6:28:00 PM
amazing pen you have, dear Nette. Congrats in the contest
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Date: 8/28/2020 8:37:00 AM
Stargazer - "celestial pilgrim" - on an "odyssey." So creative and so uniquely expressed. Congratulations Nette on your well deserved win!
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Date: 8/27/2020 6:30:00 PM
Amazing poetry nette, love the journey, and where, your wonderful mind takes one...congratulations,,stay safe, my friend.
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Date: 8/27/2020 5:59:00 PM
Another majestic write Nette, cosmos in your quill...now that's amazing writing, congrats on another deserved win!
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Date: 8/27/2020 2:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful poem and picture. Love your line, "circles on its own orbital zone." Enjoy your win and day.......................
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Date: 8/23/2020 6:08:00 AM
A poem of astronomical proportion! Thank you for my broadway win.
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Date: 8/22/2020 3:29:00 PM
Beautiful in every way--exquisite imagery of cosmic impressions--a true delight, Nette.
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Date: 8/22/2020 1:57:00 PM
Quite a challenge to keep one's eyes on the stars and one's quill on the paper, but you have done it! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 8/22/2020 1:38:00 PM
Love your interpretation Nette, the wonders of the heavens has inspired you Hope youre on the mend. Tom
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