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Cosmic Ghosts

Throughout the outer cosmos you will find ghosts leaving interstellar gas behind. That is to say a galaxy remains, where pompous, excess energy enflames a slight shiver of the cold, viscous kind.

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Date: 4/8/2025 5:03:00 PM
The pairing of this with the title National Poetry Month made me smile--such a small poem that opens into something vast. The line about ghosts and interstellar gas was quietly stunning. This feels like a flare of poetic energy left behind in the stars. Beautiful.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/9/2025 5:43:00 AM
Thanks Alesia. This was a fun challenge from Crystol. I liked that second line too. It fell into place easily. I appreciate your support. :)
Date: 4/6/2025 11:25:00 AM
Very cool and succinct. Good luck in the contest
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/6/2025 1:44:00 PM
Thanks! (and very nearly a limerick LOL) see ya Andrea :)

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