Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Ninette

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Corrupts: Epidemical Thieves- Ninette

CORRUPTS: EPIDEMICAL THIEVES - ninette


Slaves

age old

to  power:

septic, putrid

e p i d e m i c a l

thieving millions

a b u s i n g

the most

poor. . .
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CONTEST NAME: NINETTE
Contest Sponsor: Silent One
~~4th Place~~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo
8:54 pm, October 10, 2015

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Harry Horsman October 19, 2015 at 4:40 PM Amazing poetry, well done in the contest..

Skat A October 14, 2015 at 10:16 PM Olive, Congratulations on your "Ninette Win." Love SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 14, 2015 at 12:38 AM Wonderful write Olive n a superb win! Big congrats!

Sandra Haight October 13, 2015 at 8:34 AM Powerful message in your Ninette, Olive. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Dan Cwiak October 13, 2015 at 8:01 AM Your words are some of the best I've read. Getting them into this form shows how talented you are. Congratulations Olive, on the win!

Michael Tor October 13, 2015 at 4:40 AM Olive Paul said it eloquently. I mirror his comments. Excellent win!!!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 27, 2015 at 1:39 AM thanks much Michael.. =`) weeeeee..

Paul Callus October 11, 2015 at 4:59 PM Hi Olive_eloi:) Corruption is the root of many evils; a few gain a lot, while many (especially the downtrodden) get little or nothing. Excellently worded. Hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 27, 2015 at 1:26 AM thank you so much Paul.. =`) what you said here is true.. =`) hugs too!

James Fraser October 10, 2015 at 10:52 AM Part of today's society captured truthfully and splendidly in so few words. It abhors me how rife such is, and what it does and how it affects other. The Rich get Richer and the poor become poorer. Good luck little one, always love reading your poetry, soon to read beside you for many a year, hugs//James xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 14, 2015 at 4:01 AM Huge James, I also don't like that such happens.. :( It is sad reality that I think we all need to solve in a way.. thank you so much for dropping by with your huge comment.. =`) hugs tights~Olive Eloisaxxx

Jan Allison October 10, 2015 at 8:10 AM such a powerful write Olive - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 12, 2015 at 4:07 AM thank you so much Jan... =`)