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Sponsored by: Line Gauthier 
03/31/2025

 

Core strength

I have nothing but open space on offer, 
and even less to give 
you mostly pass right through me, 
Still my soul’s unshakable 
so don’t treat me as your sieve
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Beaufort Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 4:09 PM
David, an interesting poem indeed. I do admire and respect the unshakable soul you have, and I suppose we do need to be careful not to get stuck as a filter for material and thoughts we do not wish to weigh us down. Hope you are well and enjoy the freedom you have.
Kavanagh  Avatar
April 18, 2025 at 4:38 AM
I do try filter out the negativity that accompanies life Duke, my poems are a great way of deflecting its persistence, I’m doing ok, hope you are keeping well too. Cheers David
Empress Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 12:31 PM
Dear david, this poem depicts the unshakable strength of an individual that refuse to let others opinion and judgments get to you as somethings and energy that lets down just is like white noise, and thats something many needs to learn how to accomplish. I love your use of the word sieve here! Clever! And very different. I had to look it up. But i think its very creative how youv used it there! Powerful ending! Pleasure reading your poem today! Sending you light always
Kavanagh  Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 6:21 AM
Heya Ink, thanks so much for your visit and wise words, yes sieve is predominantly used in this neck of the woods rather than (colander) has great metaphoric meaning too, I’m pretty much impervious to put-downs by egotists, and firmly believe in treating everyone with the same respect or distain they treat me with, I prefer to stand my own ground, as I don’t have any imaginary moral high ground to take! Although I will always grasp that piece of light you send, cheers David
Lane Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 3:06 PM
I had to read it twice, expecting your last word to be slave. That’s the way to tell someone to keep their dirt to themselves.
Lane Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 3:47 PM
Lol for some, but a few toxins come in x-Large size. I’d want those to wash down the drain. lol not keeping what goes thru. Have a good night.
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 3:39 PM
Maybe smaller holes might offer more protection when the onslaught arrives, :)
Lane Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 3:31 PM
We better make sure the holes in our sieves are large enough not to let the nasty stuff get through without tainting us.
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 3:26 PM
Heya Lin, yes indeed that is certainly one interpretation, another is perhaps our unseen inner strengths that give us the ability to filter out the harsh realities of life, cheers David
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