Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Cooling Toes

by Michael J Falotico

                                               On a warm summer night..
                                            Two hands woven in each other..
                                       The ocean is painted by the moonlight..
                                    The glow follows our steps along the beach..
                                 We lie on the warm dry sand as the sea rides in..
                               Our toes curl as the water plays with our bare feet..
                                   Ankles entwined as baby shells tickle our toes..
                             Two bodies melted in a moonlight heat under the stars..
                           The scent of the sea and the crashing waves are the flow..
                              An evening of bliss from just the start of cooling toes..

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Andrea Dietrich June 9, 2011 at 7:34 PM oooh la la, Michael, and it all started with cooling toes!! Congrats on your super fine poem. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta June 9, 2011 at 10:24 AM Accept my congratulations on the win in the contest of Francine, Michael

Ralph Taylor June 8, 2011 at 2:07 PM Congrats on your win, Mike. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph

Jack Horne June 8, 2011 at 11:47 AM Many congrats to you, Michael : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 8, 2011 at 11:13 AM Congrats Michael on your great win with this delightful write my W.K. so cool like u luv.. your Jersey Girl in warm weather mode enjoying 100 degrees..oh..so much..luv..forever..

Cory Long June 8, 2011 at 10:59 AM congrats on your win. cory

Carol Sunshine Brown June 8, 2011 at 10:37 AM Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Barefoot"contest Michael. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts June 8, 2011 at 10:33 AM congrats Michael with your 9th place win in the contest with this lovely image you've painted

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 5, 2011 at 2:14 PM ooh what a lovely take on being barefoot-- romantic as you only know how ;) enjoyed this one as well :) hugs

Wilma Neels June 5, 2011 at 10:00 AM Somehow it ended with not so cooling toes hey Michael? Romantic and captivating Mr. Romance.. Needless to say I love this one. All the best for Francine's contest.. love Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire June 5, 2011 at 9:56 AM What a romantic way to spend a summer evening, Michael! Your poem allows the reader to feel the cool waves washing over your bare feet as you play "footsies" with your love. The scent and sound add a masterful touch. Excellent entry for Francine's contest. Winning wishes headed your way! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 5, 2011 at 8:22 AM Seems we just fulfilled your wonderful words Michael on our beach for ten glorious days luv.. and this is a mood setter and mind enticer write luv.. soothing and sultry intertwining luv and romance with the elements.. good luck in the contest .. precious poetry ..my W.K. your Jersey Girl in sultry mode..luv..thankxxx..

Poet Tacito June 5, 2011 at 6:34 AM A phenomenally romantic setting. Damn, nice job.

Nette Onclaud June 5, 2011 at 6:21 AM okay, i was really stunned by the romantic mood of this piece.. so well=written, michael.. you bared it all! winning material for me.. :) huggs, nette

Gwendolen Song June 5, 2011 at 5:58 AM As purple paperclips wash up on the shore.... I wrote the final line. ha ha ha...... Hi Michael-the form of your poem is suave..love the concept...super sensual and playful combined. This is a HIT! Best to you--- Gwendolen