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Smoky Mountain Stream In Falla nonsensicle work..Just for fun. 

Cool Waters

Cool waters casade over myriad rocks. That serpentine creek which heads to sea Voice lilts,, its charm draws me in period Fears enters as I sit under the tree Crescent moon rising gives off lunar light There appears a phosphorous light green glow Creatures who are naturally bright at night Water ripples by, while soft breezes blow Fear gives way to the beautiful set-up By God's verdant earth, Lord of creation Then creatures slither emptying my cup A lizard, not a nebular station The negative ions should be soothing A night visit seems to offer musings
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Kerr Avatar
June 13, 2025 at 12:30 AM
Superb sonnet, Sara. A precise selection of the bank words in pivotal areas of this work. Congratulations on your success. Thank you so much for your comment on my entry Howard
Kendrick Avatar
June 13, 2025 at 4:34 AM
Howard, It is nice to have you drop by and leave a comment with congratulations. Sara K
Raven Avatar
June 5, 2025 at 12:27 PM
Hi Sara, this is never nonsensical; this is excellent writing. I love the canvas of night that you paint for us. I always love to be near flowing waters, it seems to bring ease to my mind, as your words cascade down the page, a waterfall of excellence. A sonnet flowing with life. Your friend always ..... Mike. XXX
Kendrick Avatar
June 5, 2025 at 4:55 PM
Thank you, Mike, for the nice review of my work. Your lines are so uplifting. Sara K
George Avatar
June 5, 2025 at 12:32 AM
You are not nonsensical here, dear Sara. This is truly a great sonnet. You have picturized the beauty of running waters in powerful images.
Kendrick Avatar
June 5, 2025 at 10:56 AM
Why, thank you, Valsa. Your comments are so uplifting. Thanks for the visit. Sara K
Proxenos Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 9:43 AM
You are such a wonderful, clever poetess, an inspiration to this site. Sara i love and admire your poetic skill and this gem is no exception. I have not been very active on poetry soup, but saw this poem and had to comment about how I feel about your poetry. Be well and hope to see you soon! Blessings my friend, Jennifer
Kendrick Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 2:44 PM
Jennifer, your kind words in this review are so uplifting and encouraging. Thanks for the visit. Sara K
Buhagiar Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 5:29 AM
Glad you enjoyed writing this poem. Difficult words but you use them with ease.
Kendrick Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 2:43 PM
Thank you, Victor. It wasn't the easiest one to write but interesting to work with those words. Sara K
Andresen Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 4:16 PM
- An eerie nocturnal visit under the light of the crescent moon, Sara :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 4:08 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise, of course, totally fictional. LOL..Sara K
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