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Smoky Mountain Stream In Fall a nonsensicle work..Just for fun.

Cool waters casade over myriad rocks. That serpentine creek which heads to sea Voice lilts,, its charm draws me in period Fears enters as I sit under the tree Crescent moon rising gives off lunar light There appears a phosphorous light green glow Creatures who are naturally bright at night Water ripples by, while soft breezes blow Fear gives way to the beautiful set-up By God's verdant earth, Lord of creation Then creatures slither emptying my cup A lizard, not a nebular station The negative ions should be soothing A night visit seems to offer musings

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Howard Kerr

Date: 6/13/2025 12:30:00 AM

Superb sonnet, Sara. A precise selection of the bank words in pivotal areas of this work. Congratulations on your success. Thank you so much for your comment on my entry Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/13/2025 4:34:00 AM

Howard, It is nice to have you drop by and leave a comment with congratulations. Sara K

Vladislav Raven

Date: 6/5/2025 12:27:00 PM

Hi Sara, this is never nonsensical; this is excellent writing. I love the canvas of night that you paint for us. I always love to be near flowing waters, it seems to bring ease to my mind, as your words cascade down the page, a waterfall of excellence. A sonnet flowing with life. Your friend always ..... Mike. XXX

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/5/2025 4:55:00 PM

Thank you, Mike, for the nice review of my work. Your lines are so uplifting. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 6/5/2025 12:32:00 AM

You are not nonsensical here, dear Sara. This is truly a great sonnet. You have picturized the beauty of running waters in powerful images.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/5/2025 10:56:00 AM

Why, thank you, Valsa. Your comments are so uplifting. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/3/2025 9:43:00 AM

You are such a wonderful, clever poetess, an inspiration to this site. Sara i love and admire your poetic skill and this gem is no exception. I have not been very active on poetry soup, but saw this poem and had to comment about how I feel about your poetry. Be well and hope to see you soon! Blessings my friend, Jennifer

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/3/2025 2:44:00 PM

Jennifer, your kind words in this review are so uplifting and encouraging. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/3/2025 5:29:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed writing this poem. Difficult words but you use them with ease.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/3/2025 2:43:00 PM

Thank you, Victor. It wasn't the easiest one to write but interesting to work with those words. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/2/2025 4:16:00 PM

- An eerie nocturnal visit under the light of the crescent moon, Sara :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/3/2025 4:08:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise, of course, totally fictional. LOL..Sara K