Cool Light Breeze Across the Seine

On the stone whitebeige border of a bridge over the Seine,
  she rests her two arms, her body leaning on her outer forearms;
  the tearlet longlaced white ruffles on her longsleeved dark skyblue dress
    fall in small tiered cascades from long somewhat full sleeves
                                                  gathered at the wrists;
  her medium light brown hair with orangey tints hangs in
                                  voluminous ringlets over her shoulders.
She looks across the Seine with her longlashed mediumlight brown eyes.
A very light breeze touches her hair, ruffles and long full dress lightly,
  creating a soft ripple (tingle), tinkle; her folded-in-an open-clasp hands
                                   look like they are folded in an earnest suppliant's
                                                   prayer.
Oh for a sight of Jean (her cavalier), or even a word or letter - to ease her
                                   ruminating anxious (but also hopeful) heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Ekpemandu Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 1:10 AM
nice piece joined reading this
Thompson Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 5:41 PM
Nice detail. I felt and saw it. I liked this, thank you.
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February 28, 2012 at 3:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your comment. I am very glad that you enjoyed my poem. I do not have anymore time left on the computer. I liked your poem about optimism. From: Rosanne S.
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