Cool Down - Turns the Heat Up

to escape the sun
we frolic in the ocean
igniting our fire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 11:15 AM
I am stopping in today to thank you for all your wonderful comments Wilma. May your weekend be one of much joy to you and may it bring inspiration to the end of your pen. Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 5:52 PM
Wilma, you need to stop this, girl! It's getting hot in here! lol But I love your Senryu!! Going to my fav. Love, Audrey
Horsman Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 7:02 AM
Truly hot Wilma, awesome. Harry
Fraser Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 9:03 AM
Blimey, I'm going to swoon again. Now where is this secret cove > another dreamy Senyru Wilma >> James ;)
Bloomsfield Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 4:36 AM
sizzzling!great work!
Horsman Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 1:26 AM
we certainly do Wilma, again a wonderfull thought provoking poem from you, just love them. Harry
Sweetheart Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 9:33 PM
My kinda write Wilma..luv the ocean.. luv the sun.. luv the fire .. its all good my friend.. an exquisite piece luv.. enjoyed tonight.. hard to cool down tonight..Ron just got home from being away five days....and nights...haha..
Dietrich Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 8:28 PM
VErY INTERESTING and creative, Wilma!!
Wilson Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 8:05 PM
are you saying..like Jim Morrison,,come on baby light my fire?!!! loved it Wilma..take care~Deb
Mehta Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 3:30 PM
the fire ingniting with passion is much more pleasurable than out in the sun, Wilma
Hilliker Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 12:35 PM
A lot said in a few words.
K. Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 10:41 AM
way to go for you for reading between lines-- ;) and eep I am still awake?? O_0
Locksley Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 10:39 AM
It's that fire within you're talking about, right? Great romantic poem, Wilma!
A   Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 10:04 AM
A wonderful senryu, Wilma! wow very intense, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
K. Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 10:01 AM
sounds like fun, Wilma :) very cool irony here ;) haha hope I am making sense? hugs to you
Devonshire Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 9:28 AM
Well, that's another thing we have in common, Wilma. People down in Florida frolic in the ocean all year long. Here in New Jersey, the swimming season is much shorter. Enjoyed your senryu, Wilma! Have a wonderful day. Love, Carolyn
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