Convoluted

My subjective has been documented by my objective – sort of like, my thoughts verify my brain, though no one can see them. I guess, what I'm trying to say is, Time exists independent of watches and hourglasses, I think...well, this is getting far more convoluted than I had originally thought. I'm getting nowhere. It would take a God to explain this.

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Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

Date: 1/10/2022 2:36:00 AM

A poet's feeling, thinking knows no bound! It's needs a subtle mind to understand. I got what you tried to say, but i also cannot explain. Just feeling it is enough for poetry. Thanks - Marshall

Joe Dimino
Date: 1/10/2022 6:06:00 AM

Absolutely brilliant comment!! This is what a writer hopes for, when writing, or making a statement. Your response is phenomenal, wise and gorgeously poetic. Thank you. Bless you Marshal!