Abe Lopez Poet Quatrain

Conversations of Love

I hear you speaking words of love
  Although the words are sweet 
Don't forget they're right above 
   Your bitter heartbeat

The yelling and shouting hurts
  Speaking words of anger 
Acts of kindness in spurts 
  Bitterness is the danger

So remember to forgive 
  All the pain reminded of
I'm yearning you to live
  Conversations of love

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James Fraser September 10, 2009 at 10:44 AM Lovely poem Abe, thank you for your kind comments on my work>>James

Raul Moreno May 3, 2009 at 6:28 PM Nice work, hope you do good in the next round with this one...Raul

Carol Sunshine Brown April 28, 2009 at 6:11 AM Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Sharon Winter March 31, 2009 at 11:33 AM Congrats Abe on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals. Love, Shar

Raul Moreno March 31, 2009 at 10:50 AM Congrats on making it through the first round of the contest...Raul

Brian Strand March 31, 2009 at 2:10 AM Congrats on your success in the PS contest.Best wishes for the next round Abe.Rgds Brian

Sue Mason March 29, 2009 at 11:44 AM The last line could surely be a song !! Just beautifully written, Abe and a very well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!!

Vince Suzadail Jr. March 26, 2009 at 8:33 AM Congrats Abe on your quatrain "Conversations of Love" being featured. Vince

Kirstie Fontes March 25, 2009 at 10:56 AM Beautiful! Congrats on the feature! Kirstie

Carol Sunshine Brown March 25, 2009 at 10:48 AM Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Abe. Love, Carol

Tyler Martin March 23, 2009 at 11:37 PM Deep poem and congrats on your feature. Tyler

Sharon Winter March 23, 2009 at 6:01 AM Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar

Brian Strand March 23, 2009 at 12:53 AM Congrats on your feature this week Abe.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno November 17, 2008 at 10:41 AM First of all this is a stunning and spectacular piece! The conversations that a baby in the womb listens to is a part of their development. This is a masterful, clever write. The way you portray a bitter mother pretending to be sweet, when the baby within her knows different. Genius!!!

Michael Torres November 17, 2008 at 12:11 AM Abe this is nice. Really touching write. Michael Torres