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Conversations of Love

I hear you speaking words of love
  Although the words are sweet 
Don't forget they're right above 
   Your bitter heartbeat

The yelling and shouting hurts
  Speaking words of anger 
Acts of kindness in spurts 
  Bitterness is the danger

So remember to forgive 
  All the pain reminded of
I'm yearning you to live
  Conversations of love

Copyright © Abe Lopez | Year Posted 2008

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James Fraser Date: 9/10/2009 10:44:00 AM Lovely poem Abe, thank you for your kind comments on my work>>James Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 5/3/2009 6:28:00 PM Nice work, hope you do good in the next round with this one...Raul Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/28/2009 6:11:00 AM Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 3/31/2009 11:33:00 AM Congrats Abe on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals. Love, Shar Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 3/31/2009 10:50:00 AM Congrats on making it through the first round of the contest...Raul Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 3/31/2009 2:10:00 AM Congrats on your success in the PS contest.Best wishes for the next round Abe.Rgds Brian Login to Reply

Sue Mason Date: 3/29/2009 11:44:00 AM The last line could surely be a song !! Just beautifully written, Abe and a very well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!! Login to Reply

Vince Suzadail Jr. Date: 3/26/2009 8:33:00 AM Congrats Abe on your quatrain "Conversations of Love" being featured. Vince Login to Reply

Kirstie Fontes Date: 3/25/2009 10:56:00 AM Beautiful! Congrats on the feature! Kirstie Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/25/2009 10:48:00 AM Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Abe. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Tyler Martin Date: 3/23/2009 11:37:00 PM Deep poem and congrats on your feature. Tyler Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 3/23/2009 6:01:00 AM Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 3/23/2009 12:53:00 AM Congrats on your feature this week Abe.Rgds Brian Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 11/17/2008 10:41:00 AM First of all this is a stunning and spectacular piece! The conversations that a baby in the womb listens to is a part of their development. This is a masterful, clever write. The way you portray a bitter mother pretending to be sweet, when the baby within her knows different. Genius!!! Login to Reply

Michael Torres Date: 11/17/2008 12:11:00 AM Abe this is nice. Really touching write. Michael Torres Login to Reply