Controlled Fallacy

 Our mind is capable of passing beyond 
the dividing line we have drawn for it.
 Beyond the pairs of opposites, of which
  the world consists - other, new insights
 begin."  --Herman Hesse, on Thought "

Controlled Fallacy 

I could be an enchanted dragonfly,
the one, in a child's storybook
that  lets fairies,
full of magic ride on its back.
I could turn into the wicked dragon
 that lurks 
in all the kingdoms and fiefdoms
or the brave knight
that rescues the poor distressed damsel;
the one who  lives happily ever after,
thereafter or, 
I could be her private aspirations.
Her flight from passion before the rot sets in.
I could be her secret hideaway, where
she touches solitude with reverent fingers.

I could enter reality at this point
so focused that the dragonfly would tumble
into a shriveled heap,
or become a pauper, sitting
on a cold and wind blown, treeless street.
I could be a modern day Cinderella with
a pumpkin Rolls Royce
and stained glass slippers
or,the best friend of an 
English Lord, or the maid who 
every single morning
brings him his breakfast
of kippers.

But I don't want to be an 
enchanted dragonfly.
I want to drive to some remote reality
in a real Rolls Royce
I want -  I want controlled fallacy.
I want caviar- not kippers
I want  a flowing negligee  and
maribou-feathered high heel slides.

I want to be that enchanted princess
who touches solitude with
reverent fingers.
I want to be the smiling
sole, possessor
of a single, stained glass slipper

Suzanne Delaney
 Fantasy Contest - Giorgio V

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 6/4/2021 8:52:00 PM
So whimsical, great journey and wrap up ~ noticed your title is Controlled Fancy in the book
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 6/5/2021 5:00:00 AM
Hi Line: Yes when we were preparing the book Carol questioned me on this word fallacy so I changed it to fancy. I have been meaning to change it here. Which word do you think suits. Always good to have another opinion. Love, SuZ
Date: 7/27/2015 11:08:00 PM
Awesome pen Suzanne! Powerful words n wonderful expressions n here u r at top place dear! Big congrats!
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Date: 7/26/2015 12:15:00 AM
Wow Suzanne! What a fantasy this is! Congratulations on your wonderful win! 7
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/26/2015 2:14:00 AM
Thanks so much Connie: Your encouragements always means so much. SuZ
Date: 7/25/2015 10:54:00 PM
Suzanne, thank you for the support. Congratulations on your awesome win. Love SKAT
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/26/2015 2:17:00 AM
Hi Skat: Many thanks for your unwavering support and friendship. Hugs, SuZ
Date: 7/25/2015 10:51:00 PM
Congrats on a great win my friend. Truly great free verse and expression of desires! A7
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/26/2015 2:18:00 AM
Thanks Robert, Nice to be with you in the winner's circle.SuZ
Date: 5/28/2013 9:53:00 AM
Big congrats to you Suzanne. Well done. AO
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Date: 5/27/2013 7:24:00 PM
Hi Suzanne, congrats with your jazzy poem... sweet dreamy ending.. luv~PD
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Date: 5/27/2013 4:51:00 AM
Many Congratulations xx
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Date: 5/26/2013 7:32:00 PM
splendid write Suzanne.....I am glad you were inspired to tickle the ivories again....play Blue Moon for me....congrats on a great win
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Date: 5/26/2013 7:07:00 PM
Thanks Debbie: I GUESS I was dancing to my own saxophone here LOL SuZ
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Date: 5/26/2013 6:56:00 PM
Very unique! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 5/26/2013 5:31:00 PM
Congratulations Suzanne on your win. I love where you took this poem. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/11/2013 7:46:00 AM
Perhaps not TOO much to hope for, Suzanne. But you shouldn't be disappointed with being a very good poet. Thanks for the fave.-Red
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Date: 5/8/2013 1:44:00 PM
I simply love fantasy. I also love your reality trip, Cinderella. Nice one, my friend. Best of luck to you in the contest. :)
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