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Control Freak

no life you want mine
never to feel your self-harm
try and steal my smile
facial features black blue
you can’t steal away my glow.

© Harry J Horsman 2019

abusetanka

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Anil Deo

Date: 1/20/2020 7:30:00 PM

yes, some do suck the life out of one, if we are not perceptive. Jesus told His disciples" Watch and pray for the spirit is willing but the flesh is weak. Flesh seeks its own control of the universe

FJ Thomas

Date: 1/6/2020 11:31:00 AM

May you always keep your glow dear Harry :)

Aqua Marine

Date: 12/6/2019 4:54:00 PM

Dearest Harry, No- one is able to take from you what is the most important - the inner you that glows with strength and humanity. Bullies function off low self -esteem, and want to pull others down to their own level of self harm. I hope you are staying strong! Great poem! Warm regards, ~~Aqua M~~

Ann Foster

Date: 10/31/2019 9:10:00 PM

I know this person... You have described them well. Excellent imagery. Ann

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/25/2019 2:35:00 PM

No....no one should ever have that much power to take someone's glow. Great write, Harry. :) Thanks for your visit to my work.

Vegter Papyrus

Date: 10/20/2019 6:40:00 PM

If they could they may blow a fuse. Powerful lines!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/8/2019 6:27:00 PM

Powerful, Harry! Panagiota

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/8/2019 10:57:00 AM

I enjoyed your determination with these bullies , despicable people - they certainly can't steal away your glow - well said - kudos dear Harry, a short but powerful write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2019 8:23:00 PM

This is the worst kind of person (and can also be abusive). i love the positivity of your final line.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 10/6/2019 6:59:00 PM

G'day Harry … close to insecure bullying. You have written this in savage truth style - enjoyed - Lindsay

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/5/2019 6:39:00 AM

Nice and thoughtfully done. Bless you to the utmost, Prayers, Gina

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/5/2019 3:46:00 AM

Nice tanks Harry well said. Hope you're settled down under. Tom

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/4/2019 9:59:00 PM

Strong poetic statement about determination and self-respect, Harry. Janice

Joseph May

Date: 10/4/2019 5:27:00 PM

Some things refuse to be moved, Nice Tanka Harry

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/4/2019 2:20:00 PM

Your inner light continues to shine, Harry. I'm glad you have taken the reins and control your own life. Nice to see you here again, Harry. Hope life is being good to you. Hugs, carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/4/2019 7:25:00 AM

- People steal most things today, Harry - Great written :) - Happy weekend :) - Keep smiling and let your glow shine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 10/4/2019 7:22:00 AM

Potent pen!!!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/4/2019 6:29:00 AM

I liked the confident tone of this poem, harry.

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/4/2019 5:04:00 AM

Absorbing someone's energy, willing or unwillingly and controlling it is abusive...you must resist, besides they're not getting your glow...Nice one Harry