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Control

How I long for it-- control. It eludes me. I have no say in my own motives. Good and evil converge. I am under the control of my mind's fickle whims and wants. How unfair for it to have control. I should be in control.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/24/2008 4:24:00 AM
Good write. Alcohol is one of those control problems...gambling....smoking..obesity I've been a victim of all but gambling. Your poem is very timely what with the obese problems and the rest. Love, daver
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