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Contractor of Chaos

I build it, Brick by crooked brick Hands stained in chaotic dust Particles of my own reckless creation Every choice, a hammer blow Every thought, a shifting beam I lay the foundation, without plan The pulse of impulse Guiding me toward ruin My chaos rises tall A monument to my undoing Each flaw etched into the walls The whisper of doubts I ignored The scaffold sways side to side Sways under the weight of my excuses Yes still I climb, higher and higher Adding layers of cluttered consequences Adding to a tower bound to fall It would be quite easier, Would it not to blame the storm To call myself the desperate victim Of all of life's unrelenting winds But I see the truth in the mirror For I am the architect I am the creator and destroyer Carving labyrinths from the sand Wondering when they will crumble Still, I can not stop My hands itch for the chaos For the thrill of building something Something I can not control Maybe the fear of stillness drives me Maybe it's the ache of my soul Craving motion, even if it spirals I do not know, I only know I am both prisoner and warden Turning keys in locks I crafted Living in a cell that I built Living on the very edge of life and death And enjoying it...

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Date: 2/6/2025 11:20:00 PM
'building the ruin' awesome write. ' For I am the architect/ I am the creator and destroyer' loved the read dear poet. congratulations on your win. Cheers!!!
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Brian Davey
Date: 2/7/2025 4:22:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words and I am happy that this write was so well received, I appreciate you and your insight
Date: 2/6/2025 2:35:00 AM
Dear brian, this is brilliant and so well written also for the prompt with exquisite wordplay! I love the flow and also how youv expressed in a soft cadence while conveyed such soul stirring emotions! I especially love the lines “ I am both prisoner and warden Turning keys in locks I crafted Living in a cell that I built Living on the very edge of life and death” that hits home!! So powerful’ and sincere! Best wishes for the contest! Sending you light always
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Brian Davey
Date: 2/6/2025 11:00:00 PM
Thank you for your praise and insights as always, I had been having a little trouble with my words as of late and I think (or hope) that those write had me back on the poetic path once again. As always my friend

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