Contours of Crystal Stream

Drenched in the glow of sunburst crimson sky
verdant vale veers at foot of jade hills, 
on gentle slope fawn leaves rustle with sigh,
wind carries to the deep stream down the rills,

sketching the leaping silver water line
on rocks carving the course of pristine art,
lucid in murmur on pebbles, some shine
bright, some drape with malachite moss their heart.

Walking long on contours of crystal stream,
of emerald plain’s scene I’ve not lost sight,
see, from lilac sky descends golden gleam
of twilight as I watch the fall of night.

I wait for dawn to see me in your eye
drenched in the glow of sunburst crimson sky.

May 15, 2019
Contest : Nature Scene-Orphan Sonnet
Syllable count : 10 each line
Checked on howmanysyllables.com
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Marcum Wong Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 12:56 AM
You know how much I admired this poem. Sorry it got an N/A. Congratulations on your deserving First Placement Subimal! xxoo
Hamilton Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 9:06 AM
Well done Subimal, hard to believe this got an N/A, well vindication is yours!
Sands Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 12:53 PM
This is beautiful. Well written :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 11:22 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 7:16 AM
An amazing beauty of a sonnet Subimal! This gem is sure to garner a top placement! : ) xxoo
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 7:53 AM
Thank you, Connie for your encouraging comments. I am glad you liked the poem.
Lindley Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 7:10 AM
I absolutely love this fantastic sonnet! It is truly a great and very finely crafted gem. Its depths, flow, imagery and creative thought are all top class. A fav, a gleaming gem...
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 8:23 AM
I am so sorry, Robert for the absent minded typo. Have a nice day.
Lindley Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 7:58 AM
My name is Robert, but Richard is a very good name too... Have a great day...
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 7:51 AM
Thank you, Richard so much for your prompt visit and for your nice words of encouragement. Very much appreciated.
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