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Continued Mimic Part 2

The earth continues to mimics, The fleshly gimmicks! While man flirts with his mind’s invention, Love’s intention, Is seldom mention! Of course this lie, Will eventually die, For it has no base, To run in life’s race, But what a sty, Upon the eye, Of love’s rejected perfection, The better to have been done, Almost totally shun, By the fool, Who foiled, The holy royal, And as in all cases, In life’s basis, Always it is love that faces, The mess, Of carnal minded quests, The God of love, changes not, Ranges not, Neither has he got, One particle, Of the article, Of the mind’s invention, In his retention, Of his love’s intention, The same yesterday, Today, And forever, Love is his bevel, And it is perfectly level!! 4-16-09 johnmosesfreeman@yahoo.com

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Date: 8/17/2009 9:00:00 AM
Nice poetry, and thanks for your comments Abe
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Date: 8/15/2009 3:34:00 PM
Hope you don't mind, but I am visiting friends and wanted to show this two-parter to them. They share my enthusiasm for the inspiration you provide. And, yes, you can grow a Christmas Cactus ANYWHERE. It's an indoor plant!! Guess it grows somewhere outdoors?? Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/15/2009 12:22:00 PM
Oh, your rhyming is freat, hypnotic @.@ it makes the poem feel more like some kind of rolling cotton stone @.@ and yep, in a way we all are a scaled version of cosmic manifestations @.@ thanks for the experience =D
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Date: 8/14/2009 9:28:00 AM
Indeed, man is imperfect. Perhaps only God understands the "intention" of love, though it is something we struggle throughout our lives to comprehend. Excellent use of internal rhymes and a powerful message. Great work on both parts 1 and 2, Moses! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/14/2009 1:53:00 AM
Like the inner poem of the last stanza John.Thank you for your welcome comments today Rgds Brian
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