Continuance

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Continuance

Climbing waves crept ashore and stole our footsteps
yet prints went aslant, surrendered none to our
unbroken hearts in bottled notes cast adrift
          ~~boundless praised afar

Country road, a bit bumpy, grassy, pressed ground
yet spontaneous passion stays eternal
matching close limitless decorative spread
          ~~tough and tamed amour

Curtains flounce in the wake of teasing zephyrs
yet our infinite spirits perpetuates
as the energies overwhelm and control
           ~~our love is endless

Chaotic episodes choke in riddled voids
worthless babble festers o'er empty pages
yet unsung strength fills the bottomless inkwell
           ~~unwavering writes

Coins flick to the bottom of a wishing well
ere sparkles, hopes hang on first in the night sky
candles on cakes, wishbone breaks, touch blue come true,
           ~~us everlasting 

2021 June 04
*1st Place*
All Yours (June 14)
~~Brian Strand: Judged 2021 June 13
*2nd Place*
Writing Prompt - Endless
~~Constance La France: Judged 2021 June 13

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Constance La France

Date: 6/19/2021 12:37:00 PM

William, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Endless - Challenge with this wonderful poem and I liked the image and recording also, peace _Constance

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/19/2021 11:38:00 PM

A wondrous message to come home to, Constance, after a similar eventful day with old friends, many thanks truly my friend, Aloha!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/14/2021 10:42:00 AM

Just lovely William. So vividly visual and visceral capturing every sense following the journey of love. I love the image of the waves capturing your footprints. Congratulations on your win! Aloha! Blessings my friend.

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/14/2021 8:59:00 PM

As I said, 'true blue' tis rare and few, Sam, and that you are the gilt of daybreak and the flash ere nightfall my friend, ke Akua pu (God bless you), Aloha!