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Packed up my suitcase with the weight of emptiness and left a note beside your whiskey glass ‘bout the things we would not give Walked out the front door that sheltered us inside the climate of affection and the frail things we kept alive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/11/2011 8:58:00 PM
"climate of affection" neat line! [Please help me out with a contest entry, they are really 3 very short easy forms and for some reason this is taking forever LOL...you'd learn 3 forms you haven't tried before? Pretty please with sugar? ] Light & Love
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Date: 5/20/2011 6:58:00 AM
There is a sad reflection in many of your poems....I can only think that it is a way of healing. You express so beautifully....the heartache and the dark side of family. But each one moves me.
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Date: 5/19/2011 4:58:00 AM
Free Verse dear, very very full of truth and unsaid pain and longing. Light & Love
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Date: 4/27/2011 4:49:00 PM
Volumes written and conveyed in two stanza's. Amazing! Elaine
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Date: 4/16/2011 3:31:00 PM
Soulfire, This poem reveals so much more than your two stanzas convey. Brilliantly written! Congratulations on it being featured.
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Date: 4/12/2011 6:04:00 AM
Great piece. Congrats on being featured. Best wishes Em :)
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Date: 4/11/2011 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Soulfire. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/11/2011 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Soulfire. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/11/2011 6:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, soulfire
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Date: 4/11/2011 5:02:00 AM
Congrats Soulfire on your featured poem this week on P.S. .. a great piece to share with us all with luv...
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Date: 4/10/2011 12:38:00 PM
Powerful piece filled with emotion Soulfire.. luv your title too.. epxressive to this write luv..
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