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I have written this poem, in my created form called, Crumbling Rhyme, but in this poem I have used a mix of non-rhyme and rhymed words as an experiment and I like it.

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Contemplation of Me

"The secret of change is to focus all your energy not on fighting the old, but on building the new." Quote_Socrates
I contemplate, my soul, body, my mind and me; essence and yearning is my lifetime scroll, my deep secret self thirsts. I have wishes and dreams in diaries and lists, ego is full of hope though at times there are twists; my vital force wants and persists ... the map of my wishes could be a poet's guide. I write poems, this is my life aspiration; I pray my art shows my identity, in sweet watercolors. My wish for the new year is to start new projects, I have a character that loves to seek what's next; I am not eccentric or complex ... my goal is that others see me as a good friend. I am honest, my goals have great integrity, and I always seek to increase my faith; each new goal has honor. All wishes on my list follow a moral code, my goal is to share with the world my gifts bestowed; as I journey this short life road ... and each soulful wish on my life list- I will keep. _______________________ December 18, 2022 Poetry/Rhyme/Contemplation of Me Copyright Protected, ID 12-1509-622-18 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Posted to Facebook, 12/27/2022 Written for the Standard contest, Our Soul's Wish List sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 12/27/2022 First Place
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Date: 12/29/2022 1:55:00 AM
Beautifully put. I feel that as you wish and believe, you are a true friend. Definitely you are sharing your gift of poetry with us all and many are drawing inspiration from it. Congratulations Constance on your first place win.
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Date: 12/30/2022 1:32:00 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the visit, compliment, lovely comment and congratulations, Constance
Date: 12/28/2022 8:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! Another lovely/magical write. Love This One. Love your line, "My wish for the new year is to start new projects, I have a character that loves to seek what's next;" Seek and you will find. Can't wait to read your 2023 writes. Write ON. Have A Merry/Happy/Healthy/Blessed New Year 2023....................
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Constance La France
Date: 12/30/2022 1:33:00 AM
Paula, thank you so much for the visit, congratulations and compliment and the wonderful comment, blessings for 2023, Constance
Date: 12/27/2022 8:23:00 PM
"each new goal has honor" - A very great work. Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/30/2022 1:34:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the visit, compliment and congratulations, I love that line too, Constance
Date: 12/27/2022 6:40:00 PM
Beautiful Constance, an ode to the awakening that you are the gift that is awakening.....
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Date: 12/30/2022 1:35:00 AM
John, thank you so much for the visit, compliment and nice comment, Constance
Date: 12/27/2022 2:16:00 PM
Ah, Constance you are an inspiration to all of us. Your soul was born to be poetic and rich in word and deed, continue to bless us with your poetry my friend, congrats on your win, :) ps hope your Holiday was good x o
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Constance La France
Date: 12/30/2022 1:37:00 AM
Mystic, thank you so much for the visit, lovely comment and congrats,! Yes, I believe you are right I was born to write. I had a wonderful Christmas, hope you did too, Constance
Date: 12/18/2022 11:57:00 AM
Love your poem, you put the mind at ease , May God be with you in all you want to accomplish and do , take care
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Date: 12/18/2022 12:49:00 PM
Stephan, thank you so much for the compliment and lovely comment, appreciate, blessings
Date: 12/18/2022 11:37:00 AM
I have so many wishes and lists of things I want to accomplish and do, blessing
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