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Contemplation

She sits

Alone

Contemplating how alike
Are she and this man
Whose mind 
  S
     P
 L
      I
    T

his words
her mirror her
   own

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/4/2015 5:49:00 PM
I really like this! Kind of a puzzle, but great insights!
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 5/4/2015 6:50:00 PM
Thomas.. this was just a preponderance about a friend who has written about being bipolar. I read his rough draft and thought about how much our minds worked alike when he is rational. We have become great friends despite an ocean between.
Date: 4/22/2015 2:02:00 PM
weird, but entertaining structure that is original.
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/22/2015 3:19:00 PM
This is contemplation after reading a book about a guy who is bipolar. Some of his actions are definitely bizarre, but some, just that of someone who has suffered life. The name of the book is "Split."
Date: 4/22/2015 10:11:00 AM
Very cool, it causes me to contemplate!
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/22/2015 10:42:00 AM
Please don't contemplate too much...trust me sometimes its better to just go with the flow.LOL ~Jan
Date: 4/22/2015 9:48:00 AM
Excellent choice of words and meticulous style. Great. 7
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/22/2015 10:42:00 AM
Thank You for Reviewing
Date: 4/21/2015 11:57:00 AM
I love the way you have crafted it the word s p l i t makes it very powerful with the image it creates - a 7 from me :-) hugs Jan xx
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/21/2015 12:30:00 PM
Thanks Jan. "Split" is the name of a book that is up on another writing site that I frequent. The protagonist is bipolar. The author and I struck up a friendship of sorts, and I have begun reading his book for final edit. This was spawned by comments left on his chapters.
Date: 4/21/2015 10:09:00 AM
Creative take on the subject, Jan. A 7. Hugs! Kim :)
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/21/2015 10:44:00 AM
Thanks Kim, was not really sure about this as I usually do not play with formatting like this, but it seemed to call for it.