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Contemplation

She sits Alone Contemplating how alike Are she and this man Whose mind S P L I T his words her mirror her own

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Thomas Martin

Date: 5/4/2015 5:49:00 PM

I really like this! Kind of a puzzle, but great insights!

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 5/4/2015 6:50:00 PM

Thomas.. this was just a preponderance about a friend who has written about being bipolar. I read his rough draft and thought about how much our minds worked alike when he is rational. We have become great friends despite an ocean between.

Robert Lawrence

Date: 4/22/2015 2:02:00 PM

weird, but entertaining structure that is original.

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/22/2015 3:19:00 PM

This is contemplation after reading a book about a guy who is bipolar. Some of his actions are definitely bizarre, but some, just that of someone who has suffered life. The name of the book is "Split."

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/22/2015 10:11:00 AM

Very cool, it causes me to contemplate!

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/22/2015 10:42:00 AM

Please don't contemplate too much...trust me sometimes its better to just go with the flow.LOL ~Jan

Hannington Mumo

Date: 4/22/2015 9:48:00 AM

Excellent choice of words and meticulous style. Great. 7

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/22/2015 10:42:00 AM

Thank You for Reviewing

Jan Allison

Date: 4/21/2015 11:57:00 AM

I love the way you have crafted it the word s p l i t makes it very powerful with the image it creates - a 7 from me :-) hugs Jan xx

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/21/2015 12:30:00 PM

Thanks Jan. "Split" is the name of a book that is up on another writing site that I frequent. The protagonist is bipolar. The author and I struck up a friendship of sorts, and I have begun reading his book for final edit. This was spawned by comments left on his chapters.

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/21/2015 10:09:00 AM

Creative take on the subject, Jan. A 7. Hugs! Kim :)

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/21/2015 10:44:00 AM

Thanks Kim, was not really sure about this as I usually do not play with formatting like this, but it seemed to call for it.