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Contemplation

She sits

Alone

Contemplating how alike
Are she and this man
Whose mind 
  S
     P
 L
      I
    T

his words
her mirror her
   own

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Thomas Martin

May 4, 2015 at 5:49 PM

I really like this! Kind of a puzzle, but great insights!

Jaycee Cervenka

May 4, 2015 at 6:50 PM

Thomas.. this was just a preponderance about a friend who has written about being bipolar. I read his rough draft and thought about how much our minds worked alike when he is rational. We have become great friends despite an ocean between.

Robert Lawrence

April 22, 2015 at 2:02 PM

weird, but entertaining structure that is original.

Jaycee Cervenka

April 22, 2015 at 3:19 PM

This is contemplation after reading a book about a guy who is bipolar. Some of his actions are definitely bizarre, but some, just that of someone who has suffered life. The name of the book is "Split."

Richard Lamoureux

April 22, 2015 at 10:11 AM

Very cool, it causes me to contemplate!

Jaycee Cervenka

April 22, 2015 at 10:42 AM

Please don't contemplate too much...trust me sometimes its better to just go with the flow.LOL ~Jan

Hannington Mumo

April 22, 2015 at 9:48 AM

Excellent choice of words and meticulous style. Great. 7

Jaycee Cervenka

April 22, 2015 at 10:42 AM

Thank You for Reviewing

Jan Allison

April 21, 2015 at 11:57 AM

I love the way you have crafted it the word s p l i t makes it very powerful with the image it creates - a 7 from me :-) hugs Jan xx

Jaycee Cervenka

April 21, 2015 at 12:30 PM

Thanks Jan. "Split" is the name of a book that is up on another writing site that I frequent. The protagonist is bipolar. The author and I struck up a friendship of sorts, and I have begun reading his book for final edit. This was spawned by comments left on his chapters.