Contemplating Sunflowers after Death

Sunflowers like smiling balloons,
round and robust, sounds
of the stem bobbing like a string
tied not to the past but to the soons.

Lost before noon, the duct
let out one final tear. Now
she is nearer to God than me.
Like a sheepdog, I guard my Dad.

Sunflowers, weaved into a frame,
deluded in happiness while we pass.
Petals pull at the heart, switching
moods between Winter and Spring.

His tears fill up palm lake, pulsing
of his broken heart. All delusions
fall off the cliff. Reality of life
without her, within.

Sunflowers’ dark brown centers,
the grief stricken eyes, tarred
and feathered. Childlike questions,
those eyes open wide…

So pretty purple urn; claustrophobic
words can’t contain the expression
of who she is-was. Ashes in eyes and
hearts of contemporary ascendants.

Sunflowers’ reflections, so alive,
slowly dying. We watch ourselves
fading. The funeral parading
before us, bypassing us.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Crandall Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 8:46 PM
A poetic and poignant blending of sunflowers, a loss, and tears.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 23, 2024 at 4:56 AM
Thank you for your kind comment.
Buehler Avatar
October 20, 2024 at 4:04 PM
Kim, your beautiful, heartrending poem touched me. I love sunflowers, too, and this poem shines with their images. May God comfort you. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2024 at 4:32 PM
Thank you so much, sweet Evelyn <3
One Avatar
October 20, 2024 at 1:18 PM
Hi Kim this is a real tender one.. Your poem blends the bright, vibrant imagery of sunflowers with the heavy emotional weight of grief and loss, creating a striking contrast that adds depth to its reflection on death, mourning, and the passage of time
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2024 at 2:14 PM
I appreciate your comment, Silent! I will always think of my mom’s departure from this earth. Blessings to you! Have a sunflowery day of warmth and sunshine. Higs ~ Kim
Slaughter Avatar
October 20, 2024 at 10:33 AM
Beautiful, Kim. Sunflowers are my favorites. I would love to be able to "contemplate" them after I'm gone.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2024 at 10:49 AM
They’ve drawn me in in a couple settings especially. My granddaughters gave them to me at my mom’s funeral. I kept watch over them as they faded. The other is happier, in Minnesota, bright and beautiful…lots of them in Spring. Thanks for sharing ! Hugs
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October 20, 2024 at 1:44 AM
Such a heartwrenching poem Kim, sadly it's something we all encounter in our lives.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2024 at 5:23 AM
Yes, if not in early life catches up with us. As we grow older we find many loved ones pass away. Bless you, John!
Hind Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 7:26 PM
Is this about your mother? It's so, very beautiful- if it is, I feel your loss., Thanks for the writing that feeds my soul tonight. hugs, dear Kim <3
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2024 at 5:21 AM
Thank you, Paige! Yes, this is about my mom who passed away 3 years ago. Hugs ~ Kim
Sands Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 3:51 PM
Wow! This poem is amazing . It pulled me in from the very first line...sunflowers like smiling balloons. I love the details with the feelings expressed. Well written. A Fave for me! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 5:14 PM
So happy you liked! Hugs :)
Richards Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 11:10 AM
Kim, you have written a profound piece. Sunflowers remind me of my childhood - we often snacked on the ripe seeds before the birds could get to them. The nodding of their heads before dying, always filled me with a sense of melancholy.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 11:13 AM
Thank you, Suzette! Sunflowers are joy and sadness. I appreciate you! :)
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