Contemplating Sunflowers after Death

Sunflowers like smiling balloons,
round and robust, sounds
of the stem bobbing like a string
tied not to the past but to the soons.

Lost before noon, the duct
let out one final tear. Now
she is nearer to God than me.
Like a sheepdog, I guard my Dad.

Sunflowers, weaved into a frame,
deluded in happiness while we pass.
Petals pull at the heart, switching
moods between Winter and Spring.

His tears fill up palm lake, pulsing
of his broken heart. All delusions
fall off the cliff. Reality of life
without her, within.

Sunflowers’ dark brown centers,
the grief stricken eyes, tarred
and feathered. Childlike questions,
those eyes open wide…

So pretty purple urn; claustrophobic
words can’t contain the expression
of who she is-was. Ashes in eyes and
hearts of contemporary ascendants.

Sunflowers’ reflections, so alive,
slowly dying. We watch ourselves
fading. The funeral parading
before us, bypassing us.

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Date: 10/22/2024 8:46:00 PM
A poetic and poignant blending of sunflowers, a loss, and tears.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2024 4:56:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment.
Date: 10/20/2024 4:04:00 PM
Kim, your beautiful, heartrending poem touched me. I love sunflowers, too, and this poem shines with their images. May God comfort you. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2024 4:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, sweet Evelyn <3
Date: 10/20/2024 1:18:00 PM
Hi Kim this is a real tender one.. Your poem blends the bright, vibrant imagery of sunflowers with the heavy emotional weight of grief and loss, creating a striking contrast that adds depth to its reflection on death, mourning, and the passage of time
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2024 2:14:00 PM
I appreciate your comment, Silent! I will always think of my mom’s departure from this earth. Blessings to you! Have a sunflowery day of warmth and sunshine. Higs ~ Kim
Date: 10/20/2024 10:33:00 AM
Beautiful, Kim. Sunflowers are my favorites. I would love to be able to "contemplate" them after I'm gone.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2024 10:49:00 AM
They’ve drawn me in in a couple settings especially. My granddaughters gave them to me at my mom’s funeral. I kept watch over them as they faded. The other is happier, in Minnesota, bright and beautiful…lots of them in Spring. Thanks for sharing ! Hugs
Date: 10/20/2024 1:44:00 AM
Such a heartwrenching poem Kim, sadly it's something we all encounter in our lives.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2024 5:23:00 AM
Yes, if not in early life catches up with us. As we grow older we find many loved ones pass away. Bless you, John!
Date: 10/19/2024 7:26:00 PM
Is this about your mother? It's so, very beautiful- if it is, I feel your loss., Thanks for the writing that feeds my soul tonight. hugs, dear Kim <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2024 5:21:00 AM
Thank you, Paige! Yes, this is about my mom who passed away 3 years ago. Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 10/19/2024 3:51:00 PM
Wow! This poem is amazing . It pulled me in from the very first line...sunflowers like smiling balloons. I love the details with the feelings expressed. Well written. A Fave for me! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2024 5:14:00 PM
So happy you liked! Hugs :)
Date: 10/19/2024 11:10:00 AM
Kim, you have written a profound piece. Sunflowers remind me of my childhood - we often snacked on the ripe seeds before the birds could get to them. The nodding of their heads before dying, always filled me with a sense of melancholy.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2024 11:13:00 AM
Thank you, Suzette! Sunflowers are joy and sadness. I appreciate you! :)
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