Contemplating Socrates

I felt I had not learned, and knew nothing
Of the analysis of a flower
The more I read the darker became my cave
When the boulder of your name
Was rolled like Sisyphusian task upon me
What did he not know
Who said so many things before Christ came
I set out like a river
Tumbling down an impolite hillside
Looking under the dress of stones
And caressing the dirty feet of bridges
Some who sped ahead of me
Came back bruised and salted by the sea
Yet I was determined
Because of your Alexandrian beginning
To let you know
How unwell I fit with crowds
Making status statements 
With nuances of the dead classic
And all in vain
All in vain
It was not the donut that he liked
It was the hole
The empty center we pay for 
With dead days

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/8/2010 8:35:00 AM
What is this, philosophy or history ... I don't care. Brother, do you get high to make these images that you spin like a web? Terrifically awesome!
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Date: 10/20/2010 5:29:00 AM
good morning to you!! *u*
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Date: 10/19/2010 6:20:00 PM
Where do you get your amazing concepts from, David? The more you read -- the darker became your cave. Sometimes we can be blissfully ignorant. I'm still contemplating the appreciate for the hole as opposed to the donut. Very intriguing, David! Socrates was a great thinker. Love, Carolyn
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