Contagious Disease

Beware the loose tongue Spewing out mean, nasty words Contagious disease Harming the self and others Inner longing for solace
June 1, 2021
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Rigoler Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 7:34 AM
Mr. Trump has no problem sleeping well, apparently. / Maurice
Hankins Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 8:21 AM
Mr. Trump is so delusional, he doesn't know whether he's coming or going...and he's getting worse! Instead of jail, he might wind up in a mental institution.
Cheney Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 7:42 AM
The soothing tongue is a tree of life, but a perverse tongue crushes the spirit. A Proverb echoed superbly in your poem.
Hankins Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 8:27 AM
Thanks, Kenneth. Good one to know!
Krutsinger Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 3:11 AM
"spewing out mean, nasty words" does not work well for me; I do not sleep well as it is.
Hankins Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 8:28 AM
Thanks for your insightful comment, Caren. I wouldn't think most people sleep well after spewing out nasty words! Have a terrific week, friend.
Rone Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 6:23 PM
Harming one's self indeed. Pride is internal but integrity is bestowed by others. - Ken
Hankins Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 6:46 PM
Ken, thank you for your thoughtful comment, adding to the worth of my poem. Thanks for your visit and the read.
Wolf Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 6:04 PM
Hadn't thought of nasty words as a 'contagious disease,' but you're right. They are. Indeed, they're a veritable epidemic. ~ Wearing a mouth mask
Hankins Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 6:47 PM
Yes, unfortunately, they are, and they spread like wildfire. Masks do not help, I'm afraid, in this case.
Merryman Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 4:38 PM
Well said, Milton! Your tanka conveys a wise message! Blessings, Kim M
Hankins Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 6:53 PM
Thanks so much, Kim. I appreciate your warm and kind thought.
DiMino Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 2:58 PM
It is true: what we spew out always comes back at us -- wise words. Great read!
Hankins Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 3:49 PM
Thanks, Joe. Appreciated your visit and your comment.
Sands Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 1:07 PM
True! Beware of loose tongue. Those words, can't be taken back. Good one! :)
Hankins Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 1:09 PM
Thank you, Heidi. I've learned the hard way, obviously!
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