Sand Blown Poet Free verse

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Consumer Mess-Ed-Ages

t.v.'s mind mirror reflects upside down side-ways and backwards

---in past

missed ages
masked sages
massed stages'as
mixed ages
watched

---now t.v. consumes

massed stages
mask age'as
missed sages
messed ages as
ads


stans sand

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Jennifer Fenn February 20, 2021 at 2:30 PM Creative! Sand Blown February 20, 2021 at 7:15 PM ...thanks...things can take a while to manifest as words : ) stan sand

David Kavanagh February 12, 2021 at 12:15 AM Message coming through loud and clear, Stan like my big flat hypnotic tv, great word stripping, and play, cheers David Sand Blown February 15, 2021 at 8:25 PM ...thanks dave....a consumer culture can lead people thru their day so subtly it's hypnotic at times.....stan sand

Linda Alice Fowler February 10, 2021 at 6:51 AM My head is spinning :)) Nice one! Linda Sand Blown February 10, 2021 at 12:44 PM thanks.....t.v. media is as thee social teaching device...like something out of science fiction....kinda weird at times... stan sand

Anil Deo February 9, 2021 at 7:01 PM creative, provocative, meditative contribution. ThanX, DEO Sand Blown February 10, 2021 at 12:43 PM thanks for the reply....was trying to make a play on the word 'messages'.....stan sand