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Constipation

Constipation! Such consternation A work in progress So much left unsaid… Fragments of angst Long standing wiles With nothing but cold tiles But when it works All progress is swift Everything said, comprehension is clear Tension is freed and All qualms ignored Bodily function is restored Lambs flinging about in joy Hallelujah! 22 Nov. 2014

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Angie Thomas

Date: 2/17/2015 5:32:00 AM

Lol... Awsome write :) 7

Mark Trichet
Date: 2/24/2015 2:15:00 AM

Thanks Angie :)-

Funom Makama

Date: 2/6/2015 6:48:00 AM

You write graciously and wonderfully. Its blissful coming across this piece. There's nothing more than I can say other than, this is simply awesome and great

Mark Trichet
Date: 2/14/2015 2:57:00 AM

Thanks Funom, I appreciate your kind words.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/6/2014 7:14:00 AM

you could have rhymed wiles with piles lol - very good write:-) Hugs jan xx

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 12/5/2014 7:06:00 PM

Really it is!an established truth.Thanks for sharing.Trgards. -Safa