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cold constellations degraded by detritus ~ cosmic collision

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Date: 10/17/2023 4:57:00 AM
"Cold constellations" That's a very profound word-combination and can be interpreted in many emotive ways.. "Cosmic collision" Now, that's very intriguing! I am loving your poetic skills here and the enchanting alliterative flow, brilliantly crafted!!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/17/2023 7:30:00 AM
Hello Hiya. I am always pleased by your visits and thoughtful comments. Many thanks and hugs. Linda :)
Date: 10/17/2023 12:48:00 AM
Alliteration is a powerful weapon. Loved your haiku. Blessings.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/17/2023 7:28:00 AM
Thanks so much dear Victor! :)
Date: 10/16/2023 2:23:00 PM
I enjoyed your alliteration...and found your words thought-provoking. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/16/2023 4:19:00 PM
Many thanks Sara. The evening is so cool - 60s! So nice after the summer temps. Thanks for dropping in! :)
Date: 10/15/2023 1:01:00 AM
Like Karen here, i really appreciate the alliteration.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/15/2023 7:30:00 AM
Many thanks Andrea. :)
Date: 10/14/2023 8:14:00 PM
Love the alliteration
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/15/2023 7:29:00 AM
Thank you Karen. Nice to see you. :)
Date: 10/14/2023 3:45:00 PM
Interesting words choices - I enjoyed pondering
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/14/2023 6:36:00 PM
Thank you Di11y! :)

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