Constant Consciousness Correction

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We encounter resistance challenging soul's blissful stance and in doing so we learn with tranquil eye to discern. Ripples arise as ordained but let's not by them be stained, distanced from outcomes, love drenched, warm embrace and fist unclenched. 16-October-2022

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Sand Blown

Date: 10/16/2022 5:30:00 PM

...yessiree.....specific gravity of time in some manifest form may cause a 'flub' in a meaning well situation....and there be no excuse.........stans sand

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/16/2022 9:01:00 AM

Your reflections were quite enjoyable to read. Your wonderful visuals coupled with your great lexicon have shown an additional layer of heaven-sent beauty. Brilliant writing that really captures the spirit of your poem.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/16/2022 10:54:00 AM

Thank you, Sotto, am humbled that these words find value in your consciousness

Becky Forbes

Date: 10/16/2022 8:21:00 AM

Love,love,love this!!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/16/2022 10:53:00 AM