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Tri-Con
Created by Connie Marcum Wong consisting of at least 4 three-line stanzas. Each line has no set meter or syllable count. The last word in each stanza must rhyme with the following Stanza and then you need to change your rhyming word again in the third stanza and so on.

Constance, my friend, like you, "I am a dreamer," treading on "the pathless path" of fate tending to the "scars on my soul." "Memories" have you "looking inward," writing "poems that take my breath away," lamenting how "rainy day blues" have levied their toll. You've shown me "the beauty of morning dew," the "surreal," "unfathomable reverie" of "dreamy places," and had me "flying with the birds." "Sometimes" it feels like I'm "walking on broken glass," or "drowning" "in the deep, deep blue sea," when I hear "sorrow: like a lover," whisper such sad words. Citing "the beauty in rain" and "the beauty of dusk." you've shown me "grief is love with nowhere to go," and "I am one with the spirits in the sky." "Saturated in solitude," "there is a dream place" "filled with ebon veins" of "old thoughts," where "childhood memories" oft make you cry. You are "a poet born from grief," broken into "a thousand beautiful pieces," trusting "love will heal the world." And collecting all the "pieces to the puzzle," you swim against an "undercurrent of melancholy," to find both "love and woe" in the netherworld. (Tri-Con) 5/30/2021 Title Wave Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Richard Lamoureux I have chosen to honor Constance La France a talented poetess and gifted photographer.

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Date: 6/29/2021 11:00:00 AM
Emile, congratulations on your wonderful placement in the contest with this beautiful tribute to me, I am so grateful and of course this is a FAV. And thank you to all who have made comments with compliments for me, peace and tranquility _ Constance
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/29/2021 12:48:00 PM
Thanks Constance, I merely returned the favor for the wonderful poem you penned for me my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/29/2021 3:22:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to dear Constance... Hearty congrats on your win... God bless... ~ Ani
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/29/2021 7:30:00 AM
Thanks Anitha, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/29/2021 2:17:00 AM
Wonderful work on Constance. Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/29/2021 7:30:00 AM
Thanks Christuraj, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/28/2021 8:06:00 PM
Emile, great use of the titles to have inspired you to form your verse, a great tribute to a lovely lady. Congratulations on your win in Richard's Title Wave contest. Hugs Eve
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/29/2021 7:29:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/28/2021 1:46:00 PM
You honored two wonderful people at the same time. Congrats on your win and thanks for entering my contest.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/28/2021 2:13:00 PM
Thanks Richard, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/16/2021 7:56:00 PM
I have read your poem again...an incredibly beautiful gift to an incredibly talented poet. You have painted a perfect portrait using images from Constance's work. She will be delighted, and so will we if you find yourself at or near the top of Richard's contest.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/16/2021 8:10:00 PM
Thanks Milt, I appreciate your comments and I'm sure that Constance does as well my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/7/2021 12:10:00 PM
What a wonderful poetic gift you have given Constance, Emile. To use the titles of her poems in such a meaningful way is spectacular! You make my Tri-Con form as beautiful as I can imagine. This poem is certainly a keeper and a Fave for me. I loved it! What a beautiful kitty she has. Blessings xxoo
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/7/2021 2:18:00 PM
Thanks so much Connie, it's so good to hear from you, I'm so sorry you had to face yet more tragedy in your life, may God bless and protect you my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/30/2021 12:33:00 PM
Emile, wow, I have tears in my eyes, oh with my titles you have penned a masterpiece, and you used my photography also of my precious Snuggles Kitty! Have you ever seen a cat with one gold eye and one green eye ! And shows us the importance of what a good title can do when a talented writer like you can weave them into a beautiful poem and to use Connie's created Tri-Con form too, that makes me so happy, love _Constance
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/30/2021 2:56:00 PM
Thanks so much Constance, these are mostly your words, telling the story of a remarkable, talented poet, that I have the privilege of not only knowing, but also calling my friend, and yes I have seen such a cat, but they are rare, though adorable, Emile.
Date: 5/30/2021 8:35:00 AM
An exquisite tribute to the awesome Constance La France. You do her a great honor, Emile. She is so deserving.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/30/2021 8:44:00 AM
Thanks Milt, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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