Sizwe Hlabisa Poet Classicism

Consistently Yours, Mr Moon

Can I be a constant feature 
                                   Set you on your path
                           Guide you when you unawares 
                               And watch you as you toil 


                                 Can I be a conscience 
                               Help you on your growth 
                           Your constant life companion 
                          From a distance dazed by eyes 

                              I can be your confidence 
                  When words of tears stream into focus 
                     As a compass I can offer you hope 
                            of a brighter wind at sea 

                   Let me be your gold-plated armour
                  Protect you as you draw to slumber 
              When life showers with its endlessness
                       I'll bear the blows discreetly

                          I am the one you look to 
                           but yet you cannot see 
             The one who lights your path so gently
       yet you can only behold of me in the darkness 

                       My light does not create you
                        but yet keeps you in sustain 
                 Rotating about your limited universe 
             From conception till your biddings breath

                         I write to you this evening 
                     To remind you plain and clear 
              That although by day I may be hidden
               Yet in the deserts night i can be seen 

                     Don't be puzzled at this letter 
                 As my intentions have been clear 
           You're the love I seek from a vast plane 
                   Consistently yours, Mr Moon

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Skat A August 17, 2015 at 2:43 PM Sizwe, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT* Sizwe Hlabisa August 22, 2015 at 5:07 AM Many thanks Skat. Loved the poem contest, we see diverse poems across the board :-)

Kelly Deschler August 15, 2015 at 2:37 PM Congrats on 5th place!... Yes, the moon is always there for us, just like an old friend... I enjoyed the imagery in this well written poem. Great work! Sizwe Hlabisa August 16, 2015 at 4:04 AM Thank you Kelly, who doesn't love the moon :-)

Jan Allison August 15, 2015 at 1:49 PM This is absolutely charming Sizwe many congrats on your win a 7 from me:-) hugs Jan xx Sizwe Hlabisa August 16, 2015 at 4:03 AM Thank you Jan. Always supportive :-)

Thabang Ngoma July 21, 2015 at 7:22 AM Hi Sizwe...you have dipicted the moon as a secret admirer...in this bizarre, but otherwise romantic relationship...brilliant! (:heers,"7"habang Sizwe Hlabisa July 27, 2015 at 7:00 AM Thanks man Sizwe Hlabisa July 22, 2015 at 6:29 AM Thanks man... PoetrySoup inspires you to really develop your poetry. I have read some really great poems here and having contests help us appreciate the effort that goes into writing poems. Thabang Ngoma July 21, 2015 at 12:22 PM Hi Sizwe...I spent a better part of the day reading some of your work, you're a gifted writer...and I'm a fan (:heers, Tbang Sizwe Hlabisa July 21, 2015 at 7:42 AM Thanks