Considering Whirligigs

Considering whirligigs, how they spin, While I, I sip on my ginger and gin Awaiting the next miracle my way, While my hair turns ever so gray Thinking about small wonders now, And asking myself, quietly, “How?”
FOURTH PLACE WINNER written July 6, 2021 for "Bite Size Poem No. 11" Poetry Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier
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Miller Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 1:28 AM
Congratulations, a fine poem.
Hankins Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 9:13 AM
Thanks so much, Terry. It was a fine write, and I am glad you enjoyed it.
Roper Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 10:05 AM
Lovely write, Milton, congratulations on your win in Line's contest. Eve
Hankins Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 11:25 AM
Thank you, Eve. It's so nice to receive congratulation from you. I'm anxiously awaiting delivery of my book!
Poet Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 4:20 PM
So delightful, Milton; waiting for miracles is all we can do, but we need to catch them before they go. Good luck in the contest
Hankins Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 6:44 PM
Thank you, Lasaad. Yes, we must always be on the lookout for a miracle and grab it while we can. Thanks again for your good wishes.
Wolf Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 3:39 PM
Delightful, maestro! Line's gonna love it. ~ Whirlybird
Wolf Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 3:39 PM
Delightful, maestro! Line's gonna love it. ~ Whirlybird
Hankins Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 6:48 PM
Well, Gershon, I certainly hope she does. It was a delightful write and it made a delightful poem. I'm enjoying it.
Andresen Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 2:28 PM
- We all wait for miracles, Milton ... often they slide down into quicksand - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hankins Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 6:48 PM
That is soooo true, Sunshine Smile. We must be quick to hold on to them and allow them to brighten our outlook on life.
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