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Considering Whirligigs

Considering whirligigs, how they spin, While I, I sip on my ginger and gin Awaiting the next miracle my way, While my hair turns ever so gray Thinking about small wonders now, And asking myself, quietly, “How?”
FOURTH PLACE WINNER written July 6, 2021 for "Bite Size Poem No. 11" Poetry Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Date: 7/15/2021 1:28:00 AM
Congratulations, a fine poem.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/15/2021 9:13:00 AM
Thanks so much, Terry. It was a fine write, and I am glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 7/12/2021 10:05:00 AM
Lovely write, Milton, congratulations on your win in Line's contest. Eve
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/12/2021 11:25:00 AM
Thank you, Eve. It's so nice to receive congratulation from you. I'm anxiously awaiting delivery of my book!
Date: 7/6/2021 4:20:00 PM
So delightful, Milton; waiting for miracles is all we can do, but we need to catch them before they go. Good luck in the contest
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/6/2021 6:44:00 PM
Thank you, Lasaad. Yes, we must always be on the lookout for a miracle and grab it while we can. Thanks again for your good wishes.
Date: 7/6/2021 3:39:00 PM
Delightful, maestro! Line's gonna love it. ~ Whirlybird
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/6/2021 6:48:00 PM
Well, Gershon, I certainly hope she does. It was a delightful write and it made a delightful poem. I'm enjoying it.
Date: 7/6/2021 3:39:00 PM
Delightful, maestro! Line's gonna love it. ~ Whirlybird
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Date: 7/6/2021 2:28:00 PM
- We all wait for miracles, Milton ... often they slide down into quicksand - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/6/2021 6:48:00 PM
That is soooo true, Sunshine Smile. We must be quick to hold on to them and allow them to brighten our outlook on life.

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