Carrie Richards Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Conscience --- Diminished Hexaverse

heavy on the stairs
the sound of my thoughts-
my own voice resounds
and pounds on my door
of solitary

the dialogue 
within myself
never perjured 
is translucent

I profess
to launder
past regrets


if stains
can be 

cleansed

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George Aul February 28, 2011 at 10:15 AM Congrats on your win....I feel diminished for not knowing this form before........George

Carol Sunshine Brown February 28, 2011 at 6:39 AM Congratulations on your win in John's contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Elaine George February 27, 2011 at 5:11 PM Dear Carrie, Many congrat's on your FIRST PLACE WIN, with this sensational Dimished Heaverse. Lainie

Caryl Muzzey February 27, 2011 at 11:02 AM A wonderful write! Congratulations on your win with this great Diminished Hexaverse. I ejoyed the read. Caryl

Kabuteng P.Ink K. February 27, 2011 at 9:29 AM wow, what a very gripping & stirring piece, Carrie -- super congrats on your top win on this form :D hugs :)

John Heck February 27, 2011 at 6:26 AM CONGRATS, Carrie! Peace always, John

Robert A. Dufresne February 27, 2011 at 6:06 AM Cool Carrie! Congratulations to you

Andrea Dietrich February 27, 2011 at 12:14 AM Excellent message in this one, Carrie. Gad to see it on the winners's list. LUv, Andrea

Kory Calhoun February 26, 2011 at 11:02 PM Hi Carrie - Everything you write is unbelievably SUPERIOR. You excel in every poetic form. I admire you so much. Congrats on your #1 WIN in Mr. Heck's contest. Best wishes, KC

Nette Onclaud February 26, 2011 at 9:34 PM yeyy, you made it to the top, carrie...remarkable down the line! my happy cheers to you for the fine win :) huggs, nette

John Freeman February 26, 2011 at 7:15 PM Awesome job , good to see you with a top spot, Carrie. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored first place. Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick February 26, 2011 at 4:26 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Kash Poet February 26, 2011 at 2:21 PM Very thoughtful write here Carrie!Congrats on your 1st place win in John's contest---kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 26, 2011 at 1:01 PM Congrats Carrie on your first place win in John's contest with this amazing as always creative write my friend.. enjoy with luv..

Michael J. Falotico February 25, 2011 at 5:33 AM Yes an amazing write, and a form that is new to me... Thanks for sharing my dear...luv Michael

Barbara Gorelick February 24, 2011 at 5:35 PM Ive never written one of these..Im going to have to think about it. I enjoyed yours very much..Ill bet you get your stains out. BG

Tobey Hill February 24, 2011 at 10:42 AM wonderful work...TAH