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Conscience

Conscience Rattling around through the attic Of twisting pathways – Buried deep in cellars Waiting to speak Always present – Illuminates Returning phantoms of ambivalence That won’t stay out of sight; Lies Refusing to stay silent; Rationales pushed down Jumping out like a jack in the box; Marginalizations march In maddening circles of consequence; Ghosts of indecent decisions Unable to rest in peace; Sly designs of deceit Slow eat away at the tender marrow; Masks of deeds conceived in darkness Fear the face unmasked by transparency; Anxiety of sins uncloaked Trembles at the eyes of the not yet; Buried bones of sneaky words Speak out unbidden; Houses of flimsy excuses Fall like dominoes; Hallucinations born of if only Become reality; Sleep and solitude Look away; Pacing arenas of grey acres Reject clear sunlight; Music in the mind runs wild, Refuses resolution; Ever present truths, twisted in tornadoes, Remain. 8-11-20 Contest: Infliction Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 1/29/2021 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a story/write. You are very creative. Enjoy your win/day with blessings..............
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Date: 1/29/2021 11:54:00 AM
Remarkable Sam--in a single poem you have fitted an entire book on psychology! The line, music in the mind runs wild' reminds me of an old Hindu saying: 'The mind is a monkey'. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/28/2021 3:54:00 PM
Nicely done, Sam, and so worthy of the win ... on a level all its own. Hope you are well - keep up the great work.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/29/2021 10:14:00 AM
Thank you so much Gregory! Your words honor me and encourage me. So appreciative. All is well. Have been enjoying your inspired writes! Take care. Best wishes and blessings.
Date: 1/28/2021 12:13:00 PM
Congratulations Sam..Your light alliteration gives a kind of flavour to your splendid poem..More power.
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Date: 8/26/2020 10:19:00 PM
Wonderfully penned dear Sam mam:-) INFLICTIONS at the peak..!! Congratulations on your top win:-) Keep inspiring.Take care.Much love:-)
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Date: 8/19/2020 6:57:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in Silent One's contest: INFLICTIONS :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/19/2020 2:56:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise! Thank you! This theme grabbed my muse - compelling! It was like scratching a mosquito bite - the more I scratched the surface, the more I saw. So glad you liked it. All the best!
Date: 8/15/2020 3:37:00 PM
Amazing imagery as always, Sam. you did fantastic and got a well deserved first place. congratulations.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/19/2020 2:49:00 PM
Thank you dear friend! Sorry it has taken me so long to respond! I am way behind! So glad you like this one. The contest theme was very compelling for me. Stay well as the aspens being to turn. Blessings!
Date: 8/15/2020 9:39:00 AM
Very compelling read, congrats Sam on another winning entry.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/19/2020 2:42:00 PM
John, thank you so much for your congratulations and your visits! They always make my day brighter. I loved this theme. Are you working on any new projects? I am getting ready to start a project for women based on songs of biblical women. Sending you grace and peace.
Date: 8/15/2020 3:35:00 AM
Sam love this poem... I like the mild alliteration and use of assonance... Two of my favourite poetic techniques...I could feel the darkness and angst in your poem.. So many wonderful lines to describe things... One of your best! Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/19/2020 2:37:00 PM
Thank you so much SO not only for your congratulations and first place but for your ever present encouragement! Your contest themes make my muse sit thoughtfully! During this quarantine having time to read soup poets and write for soup contests has been like a five month poetry intensive workshop! I have learned so much. Thank you for being part of that process. Secret ? - I too love alliteration and assonance! All the best.
Date: 8/11/2020 12:14:00 PM
For me, the conscious mind needs stimulation for action...and we have it with the pandemic...Nice write as you peer into the web of thoughts...
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/14/2020 8:37:00 PM
You are so right! I have learned that inspiration and ideas are triggered in the right side of the brain by movement. Loved your visit. Stay well my friend! Blessings!

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