Conquest

Dawn’s herald sounds forth, Night’s ramparts are stormed, Her daunting walls breached. Westward she withdraws, Her keep abandoned, The conquest complete. Day’s standard flies high, Proclaiming rebirth, Warming the chill land. Written 13/04/2015 ~Shane Cooper~

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Casarah Nance

Date: 4/13/2015 7:51:00 AM

Oooh I love your descriptive write :) hugs xxx

Shane Cooper
Date: 4/13/2015 8:31:00 AM

Thanks Cas, I hope you are well? Love Shane xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/13/2015 3:57:00 AM

- I wish you each new day as a rebirth - a deep and great poems and messages, dear Shane - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shane Cooper
Date: 4/13/2015 4:07:00 AM

Dear Anne-Lise I have missed your words. Thank you for stopping in. I apologise for not visiting for a while I shall make amends soon. Love Shane xxx

Jan Allison

Date: 4/13/2015 3:51:00 AM

Stunning image which drew me in to the deep dark imagery in the poem Shane - I found the first two stanzas quite haunting - loved contrast in the final stanza :-) Hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/13/2015 5:51:00 AM

No worries Shane:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shane Cooper
Date: 4/13/2015 3:57:00 AM

Thank you Jan, I am sorry I have not been commenting lately lots of issues but I did like your autobiographical couplets. Thank you for taking the time to stop in. Love Shane xxx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/13/2015 3:00:00 AM

Glad to see you're writing again, Shane. Reminders of an era gone by, but with deeper meaning within. Hugs...

Shane Cooper
Date: 4/13/2015 3:04:00 AM

Love the new avatar my Enchantress, you look as beautiful as the words you write. Stay safe and be brilliant with your thesis. love Shane xxx