Connie's Fantasy Is Full Of Bull

In my deepest fantasies Poetry Contest
Anoucheka Gangabissoon


I'm at a bar drinking a beer
When all my inhibitions disappear
My eyes dance at all the men
So robust and vibrant, like bulls in a bin

I double down on my fantasy
And order a Hennessey 
For it has a stronger kick and bite
And I begin spinning left to right 

In my daze
The bulls take hold and amaze
For I'm like the lone cow on the swing
And I begin to sing

The farmer is smiling 
And railing 
The barn is filling with a Hawaiian sound
For the bulls are going to  town

The bartender waves a hand
And my smile vanishes from fantasy land
Gees I say
I was beginning to like the hay

The guy on my left soon eyes me
And I feel his eyes under my dress and spree
I laugh at his plight
Saying I had enough for one night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 1/12/2025 5:55:00 AM
There you go, Connie, you selected the wrong poetry form and there's no way you can edit the poem correctly back to RHYME. You now are lost at sea and your boat has sunk.
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 2/27/2025 7:41:00 AM
Ha, ha I got a 3rd place.
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 2/4/2025 6:36:00 PM
Connie your so funny
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