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pure fragile flapping her arms soft, tiny baby fingers curl around firm grasp hold granny's finger creased, bridging the gap, folds arms soft, skinny trembling frail feeble pure Dated: 10/12/2020 For Double Tetractys 4 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper Third Place

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Date: 10/19/2020 12:58:00 PM
congrats on your win and most importantly a very good create poem! bridging the gap!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/20/2020 6:50:00 AM
Thank you for your valuable comment Krish. Much appreciated... :)
Date: 10/16/2020 7:25:00 PM
Lovely message and your title was so fitting. Congrats, Anitha
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/17/2020 2:45:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea for dropping by and for your valuable comment... Love ~ Ani
Date: 10/16/2020 7:02:00 PM
Oh I just love the beautiful spirit of your poem, Anitha. Your lovely emotional and sensory imagery captures both my imagination and heart. The title is perfect! Congratulations for your wonderful win in Eve's contest.. ~Susan
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/17/2020 2:43:00 AM
Thank you so much Susan... am happy that my poem captured your imagination. Love ~ Ani
Date: 10/16/2020 8:43:00 AM
- Congratulations on a great 3rd place in the contest, Ani :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/16/2020 10:51:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne... happy weekend to you too... hugs... :)
Date: 10/15/2020 9:12:00 PM
Lovely. Congrats Anita to win. Blessing
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/15/2020 10:05:00 PM
Thank you for your valuable comment Maam... Love and hugs... :)
Date: 10/15/2020 7:33:00 PM
so sweet Anitha. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/15/2020 10:05:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by and commenting Linda. :)
Date: 10/15/2020 6:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Anitha. Thank you for participating in my Tetractys contest. Hugs Eve
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/15/2020 9:59:00 PM
Thank you so much for your valuable comment Eve.... Hugs... :)
Date: 10/15/2020 7:23:00 AM
Excellent images you created, Ani, in this difficult to execute form. All the best.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/15/2020 10:36:00 AM
Thank you so much for your valuable comment Vijayji... :)
Date: 10/12/2020 1:32:00 PM
You did this very well and good choice of subject...
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/12/2020 9:35:00 PM
Thank you so much Silent One. Yes I love the subject. :)
Date: 10/12/2020 11:01:00 AM
Nice...the new and the old becoming one...I like it
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/12/2020 9:36:00 PM
Thank you so much Arturo Michael :)