Anitha Jayasankar Poet Tetractys

Connected

pure
fragile
flapping her
arms soft, tiny
baby fingers curl around firm grasp hold
granny's finger creased, bridging the gap, folds
arms soft, skinny
trembling frail
feeble
pure


Dated: 10/12/2020
For Double Tetractys 4 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Eve Roper

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Krish Radhakrishna October 19, 2020 at 12:58 PM congrats on your win and most importantly a very good create poem! bridging the gap! Anitha Jayasankar October 20, 2020 at 6:50 AM Thank you for your valuable comment Krish. Much appreciated... :)

Andrea Dietrich October 16, 2020 at 7:25 PM Lovely message and your title was so fitting. Congrats, Anitha Anitha Jayasankar October 17, 2020 at 2:45 AM Thank you so much Andrea for dropping by and for your valuable comment... Love ~ Ani

Susan Ashley October 16, 2020 at 7:02 PM Oh I just love the beautiful spirit of your poem, Anitha. Your lovely emotional and sensory imagery captures both my imagination and heart. The title is perfect! Congratulations for your wonderful win in Eve's contest.. ~Susan Anitha Jayasankar October 17, 2020 at 2:43 AM Thank you so much Susan... am happy that my poem captured your imagination. Love ~ Ani

Anne-Lise Andresen October 16, 2020 at 8:43 AM - Congratulations on a great 3rd place in the contest, Ani :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Anitha Jayasankar October 16, 2020 at 10:51 AM Thank you so much Anne... happy weekend to you too... hugs... :)

Anisha Dutta October 15, 2020 at 9:12 PM Lovely. Congrats Anita to win. Blessing Anitha Jayasankar October 15, 2020 at 10:05 PM Thank you for your valuable comment Maam... Love and hugs... :)

Linda Alice Fowler October 15, 2020 at 7:33 PM so sweet Anitha. Congratulations on the win! Linda Anitha Jayasankar October 15, 2020 at 10:05 PM Thanks for dropping by and commenting Linda. :)

Eve Roper October 15, 2020 at 6:51 PM Congratulations on your win, Anitha. Thank you for participating in my Tetractys contest. Hugs Eve Anitha Jayasankar October 15, 2020 at 9:59 PM Thank you so much for your valuable comment Eve.... Hugs... :)

Vijay Pandit October 15, 2020 at 7:23 AM Excellent images you created, Ani, in this difficult to execute form. All the best. Anitha Jayasankar October 15, 2020 at 10:36 AM Thank you so much for your valuable comment Vijayji... :)

Silent One October 12, 2020 at 1:32 PM You did this very well and good choice of subject... Anitha Jayasankar October 12, 2020 at 9:35 PM Thank you so much Silent One. Yes I love the subject. :)

Arturo Michael October 12, 2020 at 11:01 AM Nice...the new and the old becoming one...I like it Anitha Jayasankar October 12, 2020 at 9:36 PM Thank you so much Arturo Michael :)