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pure fragile flapping her arms soft, tiny baby fingers curl around firm grasp hold granny's finger creased, bridging the gap, folds arms soft, skinny trembling frail feeble pure Dated: 10/12/2020 For Double Tetractys 4 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper

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Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 10/19/2020 12:58:00 PM

congrats on your win and most importantly a very good create poem! bridging the gap!

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/20/2020 6:50:00 AM

Thank you for your valuable comment Krish. Much appreciated... :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2020 7:25:00 PM

Lovely message and your title was so fitting. Congrats, Anitha

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/17/2020 2:45:00 AM

Thank you so much Andrea for dropping by and for your valuable comment... Love ~ Ani

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/16/2020 7:02:00 PM

Oh I just love the beautiful spirit of your poem, Anitha. Your lovely emotional and sensory imagery captures both my imagination and heart. The title is perfect! Congratulations for your wonderful win in Eve's contest.. ~Susan

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/17/2020 2:43:00 AM

Thank you so much Susan... am happy that my poem captured your imagination. Love ~ Ani