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Conifers

Standing on this bluff, Gazing past the conifers, To sunset streaked clouds; I number the days gone by Since we last saw each other.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/11/2008 2:57:00 AM
A beautifiul tanka, one of my most faveorite forms, very touching and real. love Kristin
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Date: 11/10/2008 6:16:00 PM
Nice. Sad.Full of longing. Beautiful picture...BG
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Date: 11/10/2008 4:37:00 PM
Well...this is full of longing. You should just keep on loving and never seek a repayment!! Jyoti
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Date: 11/10/2008 4:11:00 PM
This is so soft, sad with longing! Nicely done! ~Carrie
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