Conifers

Standing on this bluff,
Gazing past the conifers,
To sunset streaked clouds;
I number the days gone by
Since we last saw each other.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Reynolds Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 2:57 AM
A beautifiul tanka, one of my most faveorite forms, very touching and real. love Kristin
Gorelick Avatar
November 10, 2008 at 6:16 PM
Nice. Sad.Full of longing. Beautiful picture...BG
Kandpal Avatar
November 10, 2008 at 4:37 PM
Well...this is full of longing. You should just keep on loving and never seek a repayment!! Jyoti
Richards Avatar
November 10, 2008 at 4:11 PM
This is so soft, sad with longing! Nicely done! ~Carrie
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