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Confustication

Nice or worse we need the verse!

in bad  good, nearly or could! 

never fear for the end is near 

its where there's a beginning

then..(i know i'm winning)..

...its just...sometimes oh! never mind!

you know..! these verse's can be like curses!

of all the vices.. to men and mice's!

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Debbie Duncan Date: 3/12/2013 3:34:00 PM I was going to say something " never mind" ;} love it Joe . Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 11/17/2011 4:31:00 PM I'm seeing where the title takes me in this fun verse, a head spinner that I can grin with as I'm turning. Login to Reply

Nancy Jones Date: 11/9/2011 6:42:00 PM is just, so nevermind, some times are boring, but, hey, wtf anyway? digya, namaste~N Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 6/5/2011 2:18:00 PM Really enjoyed reading this Joe,m loved how this one flowed so well too -- :) Login to Reply

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway Date: 5/24/2011 9:36:00 AM Hi Joe, I do to like it but I don't completely understand the message behind the message. The verses are full of humor. I read the comments of the other poets so I guess its about Palin or women and I believe some are as confused as me : -). Could you explain please... Lay Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 5/22/2011 1:40:00 PM Are women REALLY this confusing? This is fun and dandy and love the men and mice's! Joe! Joe! Joe! Writin em like it is!!! Gwendolen Login to Reply

Don Johnson Date: 5/17/2011 11:52:00 PM Gotta laugh Joe... so yes you are doing well.. chasing shielas not to dwell.. send ya off to flamin hell... in a handbasket.. women dramas, should be ketchin lamas hey.. called Isobel ... cheers mate.. Don Login to Reply Don Johnson Date: 6/23/2011 2:20:00 AM Yes Isobel she dumped me well, a half hour drive to keep her, Is a bell on a bike, or maybe trike, an Isobel of any type, a keeper?:) great comments Joe ...on ya, Don

Michelle Mac Donald Date: 5/17/2011 3:19:00 PM Hey Joe! "Say it ain't so, Joe..." Verses can be a source of "Confustication". (this made me smile). Nice is nice, for sure...Worse is sometimes most interesting. This one's fun!! Best wishes to you and yours, Mikki Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/17/2011 7:33:00 AM Cute..Got a chuckle..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Yes, progress sometimes creates its own problems..Sara Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/14/2011 2:09:00 PM hi, joe, thanks for reading my poetry today. IF you ever can think of a poem of yours I have not seen yet, please let me know! Have a great weekend. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/8/2011 5:17:00 PM Stopped by to thank you for your comment and saw C.L.'s comment below. He cracks me up! Confustication does sound like a "Palinism" to me. LOL Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/5/2011 9:34:00 PM Fun to read this, though it was kinda mixed up! So what inspired THIS one, Joe? Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/5/2011 4:48:00 PM Gave me a good chuckle, Joe. Especially the last line. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/4/2011 8:22:00 PM Joe, oo... sounds very confusing... and funny ... every action can be a mistake or not... well good way of throwing it out there... enjoyed,..p.d. Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 5/4/2011 2:39:00 PM LOL a fun piece. Thanks, Joe - your contest was great fun too : ) Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 5/4/2011 12:05:00 PM this was a delight to read, very cute little poem. Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 5/4/2011 8:50:00 AM My honor to place in your contest to praise Dr. Ram....many many thanks to you Joe!!! And this little poem is a delight....love the humor you shared!!! Thanks so much!! love, Carrie Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/3/2011 8:41:00 PM A wonderful contest u sponsored Joe to honor one of the premiere poets on P.S. ..congrats to u and to all the winners luv.. so appreciate my 4th place for my entry "Ram's Regal Relevance".... this poem is very unique and original in content leaving much to ponder ..your title is super Joe..luv.. Login to Reply