Joe Maverick Poet Rhyme

Confustication

Nice or worse we need the verse!

in bad  good, nearly or could! 

never fear for the end is near 

its where there's a beginning

then..(i know i'm winning)..

...its just...sometimes oh! never mind!

you know..! these verse's can be like curses!

of all the vices.. to men and mice's!

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Debbie Duncan March 12, 2013 at 3:34 PM I was going to say something " never mind" ;} love it Joe .

Elizabeth Wesley November 17, 2011 at 4:31 PM I'm seeing where the title takes me in this fun verse, a head spinner that I can grin with as I'm turning.

Nancy Jones November 9, 2011 at 6:42 PM is just, so nevermind, some times are boring, but, hey, wtf anyway? digya, namaste~N

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 5, 2011 at 2:18 PM Really enjoyed reading this Joe,m loved how this one flowed so well too -- :)

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway May 24, 2011 at 9:36 AM Hi Joe, I do to like it but I don't completely understand the message behind the message. The verses are full of humor. I read the comments of the other poets so I guess its about Palin or women and I believe some are as confused as me : -). Could you explain please... Lay

Gwendolen Song May 22, 2011 at 1:40 PM Are women REALLY this confusing? This is fun and dandy and love the men and mice's! Joe! Joe! Joe! Writin em like it is!!! Gwendolen

Don Johnson May 17, 2011 at 11:52 PM Gotta laugh Joe... so yes you are doing well.. chasing shielas not to dwell.. send ya off to flamin hell... in a handbasket.. women dramas, should be ketchin lamas hey.. called Isobel ... cheers mate.. Don Don Johnson June 23, 2011 at 2:20 AM Yes Isobel she dumped me well, a half hour drive to keep her, Is a bell on a bike, or maybe trike, an Isobel of any type, a keeper?:) great comments Joe ...on ya, Don

Michelle Mac Donald May 17, 2011 at 3:19 PM Hey Joe! "Say it ain't so, Joe..." Verses can be a source of "Confustication". (this made me smile). Nice is nice, for sure...Worse is sometimes most interesting. This one's fun!! Best wishes to you and yours, Mikki

Sara Kendrick May 17, 2011 at 7:33 AM Cute..Got a chuckle..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Yes, progress sometimes creates its own problems..Sara

Andrea Dietrich May 14, 2011 at 2:09 PM hi, joe, thanks for reading my poetry today. IF you ever can think of a poem of yours I have not seen yet, please let me know! Have a great weekend. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire May 8, 2011 at 5:17 PM Stopped by to thank you for your comment and saw C.L.'s comment below. He cracks me up! Confustication does sound like a "Palinism" to me. LOL Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich May 5, 2011 at 9:34 PM Fun to read this, though it was kinda mixed up! So what inspired THIS one, Joe?

Carolyn Devonshire May 5, 2011 at 4:48 PM Gave me a good chuckle, Joe. Especially the last line. Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A May 4, 2011 at 8:22 PM Joe, oo... sounds very confusing... and funny ... every action can be a mistake or not... well good way of throwing it out there... enjoyed,..p.d.

Jack Horne May 4, 2011 at 2:39 PM LOL a fun piece. Thanks, Joe - your contest was great fun too : )

James Foulk May 4, 2011 at 12:05 PM this was a delight to read, very cute little poem.

Carrie Richards May 4, 2011 at 8:50 AM My honor to place in your contest to praise Dr. Ram....many many thanks to you Joe!!! And this little poem is a delight....love the humor you shared!!! Thanks so much!! love, Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 3, 2011 at 8:41 PM A wonderful contest u sponsored Joe to honor one of the premiere poets on P.S. ..congrats to u and to all the winners luv.. so appreciate my 4th place for my entry "Ram's Regal Relevance".... this poem is very unique and original in content leaving much to ponder ..your title is super Joe..luv..