Confused Dachshund

There's a dachshund from Key Biscay
saving ice cubes for a sweltery day
He buries them deep
hoping they'll keep
and wonders how they get away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Boles Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 6:09 PM
So good and real clever!...ab
Gorelick Avatar
May 11, 2022 at 12:31 PM
I'm glad you dug it! ab... Robert
Wolf Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 5:46 PM
Must be global warming, eh?! Smiles, Gershon
Gorelick Avatar
May 11, 2022 at 12:34 PM
Got Ice Cubes? This limerick's pretty hot!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 5:34 PM
I love it! Giggles galore. xomo
Gorelick Avatar
May 11, 2022 at 12:33 PM
Glad you like it, buy the way I knew Giggles Galore, nice gal! xomo
Anaya Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 2:17 PM
My fave...this is precious!
Gorelick Avatar
May 11, 2022 at 12:34 PM
Glad you enjoyed!
Hankins Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 1:51 PM
That sounds about like every dachshund I ever owned!
Gorelick Avatar
May 11, 2022 at 12:36 PM
I agree this is a buried treasure!
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