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Confused Dachshund

There's a dachshund from Key Biscay saving ice cubes for a sweltery day He buries them deep hoping they'll keep and wonders how they get away WRITTEN 2/8/22 FIRST PLACE WINNER Brian Strand Contest Poetry Soup February 2, 2022

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Date: 2/9/2022 8:06:00 PM
Very interesting limerick. Congratulations!
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 2/10/2022 11:40:00 AM
thank you!
Date: 2/9/2022 1:40:00 PM
This is so cute. I can just imagine the confusion. That same look that comes across a dog’s face when you pretend to throw something and he tries to find it. This is a great Limerick! Congratulations on your winning poem. Blessings xxoo
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 2/9/2022 5:40:00 PM
Thank you, Connie
Date: 12/28/2021 9:31:00 PM
I love limericks but have not been able to write a good one yet. Yours makes me think of Harry The Dirty Dog, a children's book about a dog who buried his bath brush before running away...cute story, just like your poem. Thank you for visiting my poem page.
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 1/2/2022 2:56:00 PM
I'll have to look into the book, Thank you
Date: 12/27/2021 3:30:00 PM
too cute, if the pup only knew ice cubes melt
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 1/2/2022 2:52:00 PM
Thank you for visiting
Date: 12/27/2021 2:33:00 PM
A delightful light verse, Robert. I really enjoyed it. He has every reason to be confused!
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L MILTON HANKINS
Date: 12/27/2021 6:30:00 PM
It was marvelous, in my opinion, either way, Robert.
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 12/27/2021 3:39:00 PM
I omitted a line I shouldn't have, put it back and NOW a true Limerick....Thank you L Milton