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Confused Dachshund

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Brian Strand Contest Poetry Soup

FIRST PLACE WINNER

2/8/22

Confused Dachshund There's a dachshund from Key Biscay saving ice cubes for a sweltery day He buries them deep hoping they'll keep and wonders how they get away

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/9/2022 8:06:00 PM

Very interesting limerick. Congratulations!

Robert Gorelick
Date: 2/10/2022 11:40:00 AM

thank you!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/9/2022 1:40:00 PM

This is so cute. I can just imagine the confusion. That same look that comes across a dog’s face when you pretend to throw something and he tries to find it. This is a great Limerick! Congratulations on your winning poem. Blessings xxoo

Robert Gorelick
Date: 2/9/2022 5:40:00 PM

Thank you, Connie

Marikate Kingston

Date: 12/28/2021 9:31:00 PM

I love limericks but have not been able to write a good one yet. Yours makes me think of Harry The Dirty Dog, a children's book about a dog who buried his bath brush before running away...cute story, just like your poem. Thank you for visiting my poem page.

Robert Gorelick
Date: 1/2/2022 2:56:00 PM

I'll have to look into the book, Thank you