Confused Dachshund

Confused Dachshund

There's a dachshund from Key Biscay
saving ice cubes for a sweltery day
He buries them deep
hoping they'll keep
and wonders how they get away

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Christuraj Alex

February 9, 2022 at 8:06 PM

Very interesting limerick. Congratulations!

Robert Gorelick

February 10, 2022 at 11:40 AM

thank you!

Connie Marcum Wong

February 9, 2022 at 1:40 PM

This is so cute. I can just imagine the confusion. That same look that comes across a dog’s face when you pretend to throw something and he tries to find it. This is a great Limerick! Congratulations on your winning poem. Blessings xxoo

Robert Gorelick

February 9, 2022 at 5:40 PM

Thank you, Connie

Marikate Kingston

December 28, 2021 at 9:31 PM

I love limericks but have not been able to write a good one yet. Yours makes me think of Harry The Dirty Dog, a children's book about a dog who buried his bath brush before running away...cute story, just like your poem. Thank you for visiting my poem page.

Robert Gorelick

January 2, 2022 at 2:56 PM

I'll have to look into the book, Thank you