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JUNE 28. 2026

fOR THE CONTEST,  "PHOENIX SIXAIN"

BY SUSETTE RICHARDS

 

 

July 7, 2025

For the contest"Pick a Title, Vol.53, Confronting Shadows," by Edward Ibeh

Confronting Shadows

Look closely at shadows following you 
shading footfalls with a soft Lapis blue
Bits of yesterday mixed with tomorrow
Shadows reflecting days we could borrow

They belie the memories that we find
in their whispers of all those left behind
moments becoming shadows of our days
twisting, turning as our hair fills with greys

Shadows of moments that we now regret.
Promises that became waves at sunset.
Shadows of life we would gladly repeat.
A perfect world where we could again meet.

Alas, like shadows, wishes never last
As we hold them, they fade into the past.
Shadows mirror time, bending now with age
In life, shadows fall on every page. 

Alas, like shadows, wishes never last
As we hold them, they fade into the past.
Shadows mirror time, bending now with age
In life, shadows fall on every page.
Confronting shadows, I study each one.”
            ***
“Though mystical, wishes do not last long 
but barely moments, they fade and are gone
Only the rare survive time and its age
Shadows that fall are found on life's broad stage
Confronting them, is best left to the sage."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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George Avatar
July 21, 2025 at 6:08 AM
Enjoyed your beautifully rhyming poem poem on Confronting Shadows. Our wishes are fleeting and like shadows, they often fade away. Congratulations Ann on your podium win
Dietrich Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 11:27 PM
Excellent approach. I bet this scored high. Back with Congrats
Ibeh Avatar
July 19, 2025 at 5:09 PM
Ann, heartiest congratulations on your podium win in my contest with this amazing poem with a great message. I love the 4th stanza the most. Bravoi!
Peck Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 12:03 PM
Thank you so very much for this honor, Edward! I absolutely loved the contest topic!
Kamoonpuri Avatar
July 19, 2025 at 5:19 AM
Wonderfully rhymed poem on life's shades and shadows, good and bad, fine muse expressed on the theme wow! Kudos! Plz also read and comment on my newest poem too.
Peck Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 12:16 PM
Thanks, S. Zaynab! I appreciate your very nice comments!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 13, 2025 at 2:45 PM
moments becoming shadows of our days twisting, turning as our hair fills with greys… It's too late now for changes to be made. When shadows occur, I'll put them in shade... You’ve done well with this contest, Ann!
Peck Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 12:07 PM
Thanks, Kim. Shadows are a great theme to write about
Dietrich Avatar
July 10, 2025 at 9:54 AM
wow, VERY nicely done. I bet he places this with a first place.
Peck Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 2:57 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I loved your poem about summer.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 8, 2025 at 10:39 AM
I enjoyed reading your "Confronting Shadows" write. "Good Luck" Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.............
Peck Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 12:19 PM
Thank you, sweet Paula, for always sending blessings.
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