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Confrontation

Here you stand accused of intimidation, degradation and defamation
Daily depreciation, mental extirpation exploitation and pontification
Demoralization, cutting down people short of castration or amputation
Being a ruthless purveyor of humiliation, frustration and devastation

We gave you undivided attention, dedication, devotion and ovation
What more did you want from us, a coronation? You’re an abomination
What possible justification for abuse equivalent to molestation
Is it any wonder out in the world, there’s daily confrontation and assassination

You left us nothing more than palpitation, indignation and now vociferation
Rightfully demanding an investigation resulting in sensitization, a little edification
We have ambitions of a civilization where thrives admiration and appreciation
A combination of inspiration, aspiration, dedication and compensation


Submitted on March 7, 2018 for contest RHYME BATTLE X: SHOWDOWN sponsored by JULI-MICHELLE  -  RANKED 1ST

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Mick Talbot Date: 4/12/2018 9:31:00 AM ion reading your piece I am in awe, a well-deserved win, congratulations Line... Mick Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 4/12/2018 2:08:00 PM Thank you so much, Mick, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

John Hamilton Date: 4/10/2018 12:48:00 PM This is a master class of alliteration and mono rhyme, no wonder the win...that's a given...congrats Line!!! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 4/10/2018 1:45:00 PM Thank you so much, John. You are too funny.

Susan Gentry Date: 4/9/2018 11:06:00 PM Congratulations on your win with this delightful rhyme! Wonderfully written! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 4/10/2018 11:11:00 AM Thank you, Susan. Lovely visit and comment.

Sandra Haight Date: 4/9/2018 3:16:00 PM An amazing Monorhyme, Line! Congratulations on your well-deserved 1st Place podium win! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 4/9/2018 3:23:00 PM Thank you so much, Sandra. Most appreciated.

Jan Allison Date: 4/7/2018 5:56:00 AM wow Line you nailed this with such a powerful monorhyme no wonder it took top honours, many congrats and happy birthday:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 4/7/2018 6:03:00 AM Thanks, Jan. Most appreciated visit and wishes.

Eve Roper Date: 4/6/2018 11:35:00 PM Awesome write, Line, I am enjoying reading the rhymes :-) congratulations on your win Hugs Eve Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 4/7/2018 5:41:00 AM Thank you, Eve, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Dale Gregory Cozart Date: 4/6/2018 6:14:00 PM Awesome! Without trying to offend, do I hear an ode to Donald Trump? Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 4/6/2018 9:57:00 PM Not particularly but if the shoe fits...

Janice Canerdy Date: 4/6/2018 4:14:00 PM WOW! Congrats on your well-deserved win, Line! Janice Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 4/6/2018 4:19:00 PM Thank you so much, Janice. Very appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/6/2018 3:55:00 PM A whole lot of rhyming going on! Congrats in first place! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 4/6/2018 4:19:00 PM Thank, Kim. Much appreciated.

Tom Cunningham Date: 4/6/2018 12:51:00 PM I was right Line, it did exceptionally well. Congratulations. Tom. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 4/6/2018 3:49:00 PM Thank you so much, Tom. YES you were right. Line xx

Winged Warrior Date: 4/6/2018 12:33:00 PM Congrats!!! my talented friend...numero uno lol...not bad Line...stay in the light...^WW^ Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 4/6/2018 3:53:00 PM Thank you, WW. Much appreciated visit and comment.

Juli- Michelle Date: 4/6/2018 12:19:00 PM Line, this poem was absolutely FANTASTIC! Congratulations on your first place win in my Rhyme Battle contest, and thank you for participating! Love, Juli-Michelle Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 4/6/2018 3:46:00 PM Thank you so much, Juli-Michelle. Most appreciated. Line xx

Janice Canerdy Date: 3/8/2018 11:28:00 AM Whew! Can't imagination who your audience is--could vary from one to hundreds! EXCELLENT! Janice Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 3/8/2018 11:51:00 AM Thanks for your visit and comment, Janice. Much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/7/2018 3:20:00 PM Hmmm, wonder who THIS could be talking about? haha. Line, you did a great job. This seems like it would also work in the rap contest . There are two such types of contests right now. I am no good at this kind of thing. I hope maybe I can at least try one of them before they close! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 3/7/2018 4:15:00 PM Thanks for your visit and for leaving a comment, Andrea. I had to dig deep for this one - stir up stuff better left buried.

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/7/2018 12:17:00 PM Great verse Line, it should do well in the battle. Good luck. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 3/7/2018 12:37:00 PM Thank you, Tom. Much appreciated visit and comment.