Confounded

Confounded

                  -1-
When tension grips and the head reels
In its ever accelerated twirl
When two rays dangle from two flayed poles,
And the dumb loss of a moment’s truth
Looks so conspicuous and an eminently
Forgettable lapse of an inoffensive world
When the gentle genre to which the slamming 
Of an ever open door in the face of 
The rare perspicacity and purpose shown
By a soul, a land and a generation belongs
Looks so commonplace; when the benign
Visitor’s countenance does indeed despair
And crave a black visor above the originality
Of its expansiveness and the staggering degradation 
Of its vitality; I have this great ache’s abundance
Stirring in my cupped palms, held out in supplication,
Till it rests, for an ever lasting understanding
Ever in the vision, ever into its aftermath.
                                     -2-
And when an hour’s trial and a moment’s  judgement
Bide time in the halls of eternity
I get this call upon me to my concept’s elucidation
And this urge to its sound espousal
But in a brief and breathless pass upon a syllable
When I catch the trail left of a wayward home coming
I find eunuchs elucidating emancipation’s final flowering
In its lone path of glory.
And for once I lose my heart, I lose my sensibilities
The stupendous reversal of a progression of faith
Finally does catch up with me
Annulling this reckless gambler’s momentary wins
But who is now going to pay up its hefty price
And take home the horrid truth.



By: S.Jagathsimhan Nair
17 May 12
For: Elliott Bowe's" Drunken pen"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Lucas Mcclure Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 7:15 AM
Congratulations on your win with this awesome write!--Lori
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May 24, 2012 at 7:09 AM
Congrats on your wonderful win, Jag! I am interpreting differently each time I read it. That's a good thing! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Squyres Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 10:51 AM
I take this to be a gambler that lost his/her winnings....and now must take home the truth of his loss... I could be wrong, but it wouldn't be the first time lol congrats on your placement in PD's contest !!! Enjoyed the read !!
Brown Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 5:20 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in P.D.'s "Long Poem" contest Jag. Love, Carol
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May 22, 2012 at 10:20 PM
Jag, Congratulations with your awesome long long poem! Thank you for supporting my contest. Good night ~*~ALWAYS * the one and only :-) PD
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May 22, 2012 at 8:18 PM
Congrats on your win,Jag....Nice going...
Song Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 7:37 PM
Thanks for sharing the background on this drunken pen, Jaggy. Such depth of self spiritual assessment! Congrats to you while you are out traveling with your dear family! Friends til the sun stops shining! Gwendolen
Williams Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 2:43 PM
Jag congrats on your win..David
Song Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 10:34 PM
Hi Jaggy...metaphor heaven in here...I feel like I can't comment at all on this bc it seems as tho we are traveling in opposite directions...you are being drawn to a life of purity as u try to achieve the beauty of this afterlife...wow! I am still digging holes in the ground...Very nice entry...You better NOT be drinking!!! ahahahah. :) Gwendolen
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May 17, 2012 at 9:08 AM
a labyrinth of images, nebulous yet distinctly scibed, jag.. surprising write!.. winning's best and huggs! :)
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