Conflict

I freeze as the ice melts I move on as the world stops My eyes light up, the future still dark A pressing thought pops as the wind pushes me back I stand firm on a ground rather weak Friction underneath the feet On rather slippery slopes, I do not fall Friction in the hearts, and I plummet

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Beata Agustin

Date: 8/21/2024 6:04:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Silent One

Date: 11/19/2020 4:10:00 AM

Deep poetry, well expressed.