Confession of a Souper

Confession to make
I wonder what.
I know one sin
that i begot.
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It wasn't good
I couldn't lie.
Better to say nothing
than make someone cry.
So I am sorry
for this sin
But to be honest
I will do it again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Bunch Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 10:58 PM
Sometimes it's not even about bad or good. Most of all it seems like the titles draw people. Anyway, I was saying, sometimes we just don't relate to the poems, however I relate well with this one, probably been on both ends of the spectrum. Nice poem.
Banks Avatar
January 27, 2013 at 9:34 AM
This was funny yet real. I emphasized with the message having done the same thing myself then suddenly found myself laughing as I feared you may have been talking about me lol! Narcissism at its best - right? m
Williams Avatar
January 25, 2013 at 6:13 AM
Seren you ca't beat honesty...David
Roberts Avatar
January 27, 2013 at 5:37 AM
Iknow David but i dont like jurting people
Horsman Avatar
January 25, 2013 at 5:00 AM
Oh gosh,, was it that bad??
Roberts Avatar
January 27, 2013 at 5:38 AM
Worse.....lol. No wasnt you...Seren
West Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 10:43 PM
Hello Seren, really a great write mt friend. Rollo
Roberts Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 11:11 PM
Thank you Rollo .....Seren
Ober Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 7:34 PM
Hahaha Seren, this is so cute.
Roberts Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 11:11 PM
Glad you liked it....Seren
Richards Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 7:22 PM
I couldn't help but smile, and agree!! Better to say nothing than to make someone cry!! (me too!!)
Roberts Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 11:13 PM
Thanks Carrie ..... Its what I think when I dont get any at all. , then it wins a place in a contest then I think. Oh my...
Sivey Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 7:10 PM
This is a stupendous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What a spectacular piece, Great Work!!
Roberts Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 11:14 PM
You I can rely on to say something nice, thx. Russell ....Seren
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