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Confession Is Good For the Soul

So many times I have failed the truth It is hard to point out a single incident But I can remember a few from my youth When I was most assuredly insistent. If “failed the truth” is to tell an untruth Then, I must admit I am guilty as sin-- Recall saying I loved and would marry Ruth But what I really wanted was to get in. Ruth was much more virtuous than I She stuck to her values, no matter what And though I swore love until I’d die She lived by what life lessons had taught. Months later when we were separated And I was in the military far, far away I wrote her a letter I am sure devastated It was cheesy, a poor way goodbye to say. The worst part of failing the truth is It generally hurts another person bad, What may be worse than the guilty “Kiss- Off” is leaving the one who loved you, sad. A confession, failing the truth, is demanded Or Karma will strike with pure vengeance Especially when you behaved underhanded, You will certainly serve the full life sentence. Since the days of Ruth, I have been left By someone I thought sincerely loved me My heart was ripped, and I felt utterly bereft And I recalled how I treated sweet Ruthie. TENTH PLACE WINNER Written June 27, 2021 exclusively for "Once More I Failed the Truth" poetry contest sponsored by Kai Michael Neumann

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Date: 7/29/2021 12:54:00 AM
Congrats! .... I say "Amen" to this. Thanks for sharing, exposing the essence of confession in your awesome poetic style.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/29/2021 8:12:00 AM
Thanks, Beata, for your congrats and for your thought comment on my poem.
Date: 7/28/2021 2:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love your "Confession Is Good for the Soul" story/write. Many memories stay with us forever. Sometimes we know when we hurt someone and sometimes we may not. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 7/28/2021 3:40:00 PM
Well, I sort of snuck in under the wire, didn't I? Thanks so much, Paula, for your sweet comment.
Date: 7/2/2021 10:49:00 AM
Milton this is so sincere and heartfelt! Wonderful write! repentance is a big step towards freedom from guilt. All the best in the contest.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/2/2021 11:05:00 AM
Thanks so much, Krish.
Date: 6/30/2021 11:29:00 PM
The honesty of this poem made me smile; it is brilliantly honest.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/1/2021 7:28:00 AM
Thank you, Caren. I can tell you this, if Ruthie never married, she is the world's oldest living virgin!
Date: 6/27/2021 8:32:00 PM
I guess you got 'paid forward,' my friend. Happened to me once too. Lesson learned. Nice write! ~ gw
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/27/2021 8:56:00 PM
Thanks, gw. Yes, I learned my lesson. And, after all these years, I still think about her. Wonder if she ever got married, etc., etc.
Date: 6/27/2021 6:08:00 PM
Oh.. don't we all need to be reminded to always be faithful to the truth... for mine, I wrote about the most important truth, the One who owns my soul... Love your write. God bless you always, friend. Love, Gina
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/27/2021 6:49:00 PM
Thanks, Regina. Blessings to you, too.
Date: 6/27/2021 12:59:00 PM
Many men and women have sinned in this way. To this late day I get flashbacks at my treachery. But time is a numbing agent. The good that has come of it is that I've never repeated it. BTW, you're the first to know. Mums the word! Good clear writing. / Maurice
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Date: 6/27/2021 1:04:00 PM
Mums the word, Maurice. Like I said, Karma takes care of it.

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