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Condor

A condor in the window Lilting to one side Favoring the throat not yet marked. Cain’s hand—colder Than described. A star on frosted glass. There is light beneath the crystals It powers the melting. Oasis half-waded. A waif to the roar of dusk I open all the closed doors, Remove the drafting animals. It is a runway of cornflowers. The condor’s tongue swells Until it fills his jagged mouth. Eye of a cauldron Splashing in black mud I begin the process of sinking. Come evening I am shadows. Come evening I am below it all.

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Date: 12/5/2023 7:10:00 AM
Brilliant!
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Date: 12/4/2023 1:05:00 PM
A fantastic combination of Poe and Plath , well done Corey and congratulations on your win in Tom’s contest. Belle
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Date: 12/4/2023 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations Corey - great to see you in the winners list, especially in such a complex one :)
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Date: 12/4/2023 8:27:00 AM
this second place win was just the right amount of Poe and Plath. what an exquisite write Cory
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Date: 11/24/2023 9:06:00 PM
great read, rich, bold, nicely expressed here -
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Corey Bryan
Date: 11/24/2023 9:36:00 PM
Thank you for reading and the kind words, Mat. I appreciate the comment tremendously

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