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Conditions Within

Allow this day to Pass this cool want of script to Not say taboo asks Writing for writing Try it, crafting to apply Conditions within

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Daniel Cwiak

Date: 7/3/2010 9:26:00 AM

Congrats on your win in the contest with this interesting write! Dan C

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2010 11:31:00 PM

good one, james, and congratulations!

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 7/2/2010 1:39:00 PM

Hi James, Congrats on your win :) Unfortunately, due to some glitch, my sonnet never got entered ~ Sharon :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/2/2010 9:25:00 AM

Congratulations James on your fabulous poem being in the spotlight in Nikko Palmario's contest "Life without U & Me". It sure was a challenge. Love, Carol

Tirzah Conway

Date: 7/2/2010 8:54:00 AM

Congrat's, James, on your well deserved win!~Tirzah~

Date: 7/2/2010 8:32:00 AM

Liked this one the first time I read it. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Nikko's contest. Way to go my friend. Enjoy your honor. Keep that pen flowing. Karen

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/2/2010 8:27:00 AM

Hi James :) this double senryu of yours definitely wasn't taboo in my contest :)-- congrats on being among the winners! --nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/2/2010 7:43:00 AM

Congrats James on your winning poem in Nikko's great contest with this wonderful write and win without the letters m e and u as only the Highlander can do.. enjoy my friend... with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA..at 4 a.m.

Date: 6/27/2010 1:42:00 PM

Thoughts for the reader to ponder. Something writers sure can relate to. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Keep on writing. Karen

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 6/26/2010 2:14:00 AM

No taboo letters detected, and you definitely applied the conditions within. Nice double senryu. Best of luck if this is the one for Nikko's contest ~ Sharon :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/25/2010 4:01:00 PM

Just write for writing sake then worry about putting it into a form later..As the storm comes closer and thunder rolls and roars causing me to tremble with fear, typing this on the computer that is operated by electricity is not very safe..Then the thurder sound moves further south and safety returns to my life..Sara