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Conditions Within

Allow this day to
Pass this cool want of script to
Not say taboo asks

Writing for writing
Try it, crafting to apply
Conditions within

on writing and wordssenryu

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Daniel Cwiak

July 3, 2010 at 9:26 AM

Congrats on your win in the contest with this interesting write! Dan C

Andrea Dietrich

July 2, 2010 at 11:31 PM

good one, james, and congratulations!

Sharon Tideswell

July 2, 2010 at 1:39 PM

Hi James, Congrats on your win :) Unfortunately, due to some glitch, my sonnet never got entered ~ Sharon :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 2, 2010 at 9:25 AM

Congratulations James on your fabulous poem being in the spotlight in Nikko Palmario's contest "Life without U & Me". It sure was a challenge. Love, Carol

Tirzah Conway

July 2, 2010 at 8:54 AM

Congrat's, James, on your well deserved win!~Tirzah~

July 2, 2010 at 8:32 AM

Liked this one the first time I read it. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Nikko's contest. Way to go my friend. Enjoy your honor. Keep that pen flowing. Karen

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

July 2, 2010 at 8:27 AM

Hi James :) this double senryu of yours definitely wasn't taboo in my contest :)-- congrats on being among the winners! --nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 2, 2010 at 7:43 AM

Congrats James on your winning poem in Nikko's great contest with this wonderful write and win without the letters m e and u as only the Highlander can do.. enjoy my friend... with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA..at 4 a.m.

June 27, 2010 at 1:42 PM

Thoughts for the reader to ponder. Something writers sure can relate to. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Keep on writing. Karen

Sharon Tideswell

June 26, 2010 at 2:14 AM

No taboo letters detected, and you definitely applied the conditions within. Nice double senryu. Best of luck if this is the one for Nikko's contest ~ Sharon :)

Sara Kendrick

June 25, 2010 at 4:01 PM

Just write for writing sake then worry about putting it into a form later..As the storm comes closer and thunder rolls and roars causing me to tremble with fear, typing this on the computer that is operated by electricity is not very safe..Then the thurder sound moves further south and safety returns to my life..Sara