Conditioned To Lie

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Love’s like a flower; it needs room to grow within the heart and soul. And immature dreams cannot bloom when doubt levies a heavy toll. When passion's flame gets doused by tears, Hope overrides being cautious. Yet, as time slowly fuels fears, anxiety leaves you nauseous. Numb to the hurt that never stops; you find yourself wanting to cry. For misery turns to teardrops in a world conditioned to lie. When a moth and flame start their waltz, desire burns hotter than the fire. For enamored, it sees no faults, yet courting death; it'll soon expire. A flame can only be a flame; it can't change its natural ways. And it feels neither love nor shame; when its heat morphs into a blaze.

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Date: 3/16/2018 9:09:00 AM
Great stanza "When a moth and flame start to waltz desire burns hotter than the fire. For enamored it sees no faults yet courting death it’ll soon expire."
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Date: 6/13/2017 8:12:00 AM
You make this form look so easy Emile.. love the imagery as well. Have a great week ahead as well :)
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Date: 6/13/2017 10:40:00 AM
Thanks Wilma, your comments are most appreciated, Emile.
Date: 6/12/2017 10:38:00 AM
Lovely quatrain Emile. I especially love the imagery with the moth and the flame - Sadly in many in relationships someone ends up getting burned:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/12/2017 10:59:00 AM
Thanks Jan, your support and encouragement are very much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/11/2017 10:55:00 AM
So true... Well written quatrain...loved it... Thanks for sharing...
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Date: 6/11/2017 11:47:00 AM
Thanks Supraja, your comments are appreciated, Emile.
Date: 6/11/2017 8:53:00 AM
- The fear of not being loved ... love need nourishment ... flowers need water - A lovely poem, Emile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/11/2017 9:48:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise, your support and encouragement is very much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/10/2017 12:58:00 PM
Another well written, wise poem Emile :)
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Date: 6/10/2017 1:43:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, your support is most appreciated my friend, Emile.
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