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The me that is me is often mislaid, perhaps by intention to shelter my fear For what if my mirror reflected my soul, would the world still want me The science of hiding perfects within time Its nature is such that a new me is born It’s easy to zipper the old one away and go about life with a safer veneer But what are the chances forever in life Disguises discovered are rarely excused No matter the reasons or cause of dismay For love of a lifetime, honesty wins Yet where is the courage to offer the truth What touches the surface still fondles my heart And now there is you to gamble my feelings Oh, when and just how will I know Though view of my favor can somewhat be real Selected acceptable elements hold If what you had wanted to see, disappeared could you justify what remains I ask of you now, facades put aside This metaphor dangling in dangerous hope If I were another and you didn’t know it, would you love me still, if I wasn’t a poet

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Date: 9/15/2023 12:42:00 PM
Awesome contest entry Mike. Facades and fakery aside, do you love me? How much more direct can a poet be?
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/16/2023 4:48:00 AM
Thank you so much Tom!!!
Date: 9/14/2023 6:10:00 PM
I think she would love you and then that Love would transform you into a poet.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/15/2023 4:23:00 AM
Lovely thoughts Richard, Thank you !!!
Date: 9/13/2023 1:24:00 PM
So many will relate to your words Mike.. we all seek sincerity, but some lack it.. Thanks for writing and congratulations on your placement.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/13/2023 3:12:00 PM
Thank you Silent One, I was thinking of how so often we present what we think people want to see in order for them to love us. The contest was challenging and fun for me and I am so glad that you liked it!!!
Date: 9/13/2023 4:57:00 AM
Most would love you just the way you are, my friend. Many can relate to this- I'm sure. But please...keep on writing we love you as a poet too! All the best.. Charlie
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/13/2023 5:10:00 AM
You're the best Charlie, Thank you!!!
Date: 9/10/2023 9:19:00 AM
I love this free verse Mike. So real and unpretentious. So well written with a lovely flow. ‘For what if my mirror reflected my soul’- so beautiful. Great lines of verse. Enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. Have a great week ahead.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/10/2023 10:35:00 AM
Christina, thank you, such a lovely compliment!! Happy Sunday xxoo
Date: 9/9/2023 1:04:00 AM
Hauntingly beautiful
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/10/2023 8:24:00 AM
Thank you Curie!!!
Date: 9/8/2023 2:26:00 PM
I think we all seek unconditional love--a rarity indeed but a treasure nonetheless. Honesty must prevail--one has to be one's self. I enjoyed your creation. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/10/2023 8:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Sara!!!
Date: 9/8/2023 7:33:00 AM
A beautiful blend of life and romance, emotions that sometimes fear and doubt. Love always wins my friend. You shine as always in this signature style, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/10/2023 8:23:00 AM
Thank you as always Vijay for your kind comments!!
Date: 9/5/2023 6:51:00 AM
- No one has a guarantee for ALWAYS ... beautifully written, Mike :) - Whoever knows the essence of love ... will love you regardless :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/7/2023 11:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise xxoo
Date: 9/5/2023 1:10:00 AM
Your ending came as a pleasant surprise because I was wondering where it was leading us. Wonderful poem. Best for a win.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/5/2023 4:20:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor!!!
Date: 9/4/2023 4:57:00 PM
Absolutely, Mike. Aside from your heartfelt poetry, you have a heart I would always be drawn to. This would be a good entry in the contest, my friend ... just saying. :-) Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your mindful poetry. Have a great Monday! Bill
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/4/2023 5:57:00 PM
Bill, you are so kind with your words!! Thank you so much, I certainly appreciate it!! Happy Monday!!!
Date: 9/3/2023 5:54:00 AM
I love your honesty in your poetry Mike, i know some do put on a fake persona but I for one love your style. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/3/2023 5:57:00 AM
Thanks Jan xxoo
Date: 9/3/2023 5:35:00 AM
Beautiful writing .
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/3/2023 5:42:00 AM
Thank you so much!!
Date: 9/2/2023 7:49:00 PM
Amazing write, Mike... Answer: Of course, I'd still love you, as you would still be a saint, after all! :) Gershon
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/3/2023 5:16:00 AM
Well it seems I win either way GW!!! Sending love your way as well Thank you Sir!!
Date: 9/2/2023 12:03:00 PM
How beautiful is this take on the prompt. I love how you’ve ended the poem with the question and how you’ve also written , asking, if the world saw you as you are would you be accepted. A very heartfelt and moving write this is. I especially loved “ metaphor dangling in dangerous hope” goodluck for the contest
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/2/2023 12:52:00 PM
Oh Empress, thank you so very much for the lovely compliment, I do really appreciate! Xxoo
Date: 9/2/2023 7:22:00 AM
A wonderfully real honest poem Mike which l so enjoyed! Debx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/2/2023 9:04:00 AM
Thank you Deb xxoo

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