Condign

white light melds red streak bloody down the sky gravitational will, drawn constellations of tragedies kiss the mark, kind bullets shooting star, reloaded heavenly mess explained.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/24/2011 9:59:00 AM

I must tell you there have been so many diverse poems shared here at PoetrySoup yesterday and this morning that I am just now being able to read. Each one is a treasure to the poet who wrote it. It is a pleasure to me to be able to read them. I am so happy yours was among the ones I have read today Emily. Love, Carol

Lucas Williams

Date: 3/23/2011 10:26:00 PM

your imagery takes me by shock for adding secondary meaning within the poem. not something i see often well done. ps. sorry for all the comments lmao